Alone At Last

Swimming frantically in blistering sun
I finally reach an island’s sandy shore
Fear faded; I realized life had just begun
A tropical retreat with coconuts and more

There was little chance to explore
As the sun faded and a full moon rose
“Déjà vu,” I thought.  “I have been here before.”
But only in dreams did such splendor expose

I shed my clothes, lying in crystal sand
Far from city lights, the Milky Way appeared
Great peace I found in this star-brushed band
I strolled the moonlit shore; ‘mongst winding inlets I steered

Palm trees shrugged gently in the southern breeze
And I felt great joy in knowing I was here alone
This moment in time I wanted to freeze
No TVs, computers or even cell phones

I’d never known the peace of solitude
A castaway’s life seemed perfect for me
At times the key is in how things are viewed
And somehow I knew the best was yet to be



*For Gail Doyle’s “A Tropical Theme Under the Moonlight” contest
by Carolyn Devonshire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 6:57 AM
Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Tropical Theme" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 8:19 AM
You have portrayed a very calming picture here Carolyn.Congrats on your win.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 7:53 PM
congrats Carolyn on a fabulous win for this tropical treasure.. very vivid and vibrant lines..luv..
Guzzi Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 5:56 PM
Dreamy! I was actually camping during the big east coast blackout, I used to for 2 weeks every August it was such a relief NOT to have technology for awhile! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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March 16, 2012 at 12:03 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Carolyn. There are times I wish I could get away someplace all alone with no TV, computer of phone. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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March 16, 2012 at 10:26 AM
Awesome Carolyn , love it, congratulations xx
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March 9, 2012 at 5:23 PM
good luck in the contest with this dreamy tropical muse, Carolyn. ...er it is a muse isn't it? Or is that why I couldn't reach you be telephone? : ) And I agree wholeheartedly... at times the key is how things are viewed and hope is the key that the best is yet to be.
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