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Alone At Last

Swimming frantically in blistering sun I finally reach an island’s sandy shore Fear faded; I realized life had just begun A tropical retreat with coconuts and more There was little chance to explore As the sun faded and a full moon rose “Déjà vu,” I thought. “I have been here before.” But only in dreams did such splendor expose I shed my clothes, lying in crystal sand Far from city lights, the Milky Way appeared Great peace I found in this star-brushed band I strolled the moonlit shore; ‘mongst winding inlets I steered Palm trees shrugged gently in the southern breeze And I felt great joy in knowing I was here alone This moment in time I wanted to freeze No TVs, computers or even cell phones I’d never known the peace of solitude A castaway’s life seemed perfect for me At times the key is in how things are viewed And somehow I knew the best was yet to be *For Gail Doyle’s “A Tropical Theme Under the Moonlight” contest by Carolyn Devonshire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/19/2012 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Gail's "Tropical Theme" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/17/2012 8:19:00 AM
You have portrayed a very calming picture here Carolyn.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/16/2012 7:53:00 PM
congrats Carolyn on a fabulous win for this tropical treasure.. very vivid and vibrant lines..luv..
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Date: 3/16/2012 5:56:00 PM
Dreamy! I was actually camping during the big east coast blackout, I used to for 2 weeks every August it was such a relief NOT to have technology for awhile! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 3/16/2012 12:03:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Carolyn. There are times I wish I could get away someplace all alone with no TV, computer of phone. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/16/2012 10:26:00 AM
Awesome Carolyn , love it, congratulations xx
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Date: 3/9/2012 5:23:00 PM
good luck in the contest with this dreamy tropical muse, Carolyn. ...er it is a muse isn't it? Or is that why I couldn't reach you be telephone? : ) And I agree wholeheartedly... at times the key is how things are viewed and hope is the key that the best is yet to be.
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