Alone

walking breathing thinking sleeping a sense of absence a life suspended transfixed unbegotten

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/2/2017 2:13:00 PM

You know, sometimes i feel alone. Especially in a crowded room. Do You? I am also drawn to the title. of your poem.Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/4/2017 10:11:00 AM

Brian I think you are right. Have a nice day my friend.

Brian Strand
Date: 10/2/2017 3:19:00 PM

Thanks Darlene,perhaps self contained describes that feeling

John Hamilton

Date: 9/29/2017 10:25:00 PM

I was drawn in by the title, and it was indeed a summary of my feelings as of late, the worst is suspended animation, but life does go on, well done Brian!

Brian Strand
Date: 9/30/2017 12:45:00 AM

Thanks John for your comments