Alone

Facing the world alone
Is a heartache seared
Like no other towards
Your belongingness
To the world before you
In the ferocious realms
At which you tread
The longingness to be
One with someone
Is stronger than life
Itself, and the will to
Carry on dwindles
As time brings more
Loss, and there is no one
To share any happiness
That the great void
Shines upon you each day
As the moon tries to
Shower its belief upon
You, but you squander
Its powerful influence
By squatting at the entry
Of your heart, where
Nobody sits but yourself
And where your echo
Is your only companion

Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/16/2017 3:31:00 AM
I know you are well loved and love well so I see this agonising poem as a fine artistic expression that shows deep understanding of Man's soul! Superbly written my friend, Russell. I may not see you for a while! God bless you!
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Date: 8/15/2017 3:52:00 PM
ohh russell, this compelling, riveting work in undeniably haunting.. i love your poetic flow, its mood and beautiful word choices... spill ink, my friend.. you are awesome!.. huggs
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Date: 8/15/2017 8:01:00 AM
- Being two for a share every happiness and sorrows - Man is not created to be lonely - A heartbreaking great poem, Russell - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/15/2017 7:59:00 AM
Russell this is so well written to show what it can be like. The reader can feel your words. Excellent! :)
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Date: 8/15/2017 6:54:00 AM
I feel the pain in your words, Russell--well depicted moments of solitude!
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