Alone

Me... I was standing on that stranded Island...... alone........ Looking back..... into my Life... the past...... I felt.... I was not alone in those..... I was surrounded with my friends, relatives and all... But here in the end.... I became alone...... For ever.... I felt like I was a romantic poet those days..... I looked into the mirror of time..... The past... I knew that I was a poet..... An artist..... A performer...... More than all, I was a clown to all..... I went back to to the time along with my memories.... There I saw her..... She was with me...... She was Crying, Laughing, Teasing me..... I felt....... I was in her lap..... for decades or more.... But today even she left me....... and I am alone...... Again I went back along with my memories...... There I saw my mother...... I was with her ..... for more than several years..... Now, I feel........ My mother was better any way... But I missed her..... All I know is I left all my fellow beings only for my love...... But today even she left me....... and I am alone......

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Chhutan Dey

Date: 5/24/2011 5:00:00 PM

LOVED THE EXPRESSION "I felt....... I was in her lap..... for decades or more.... "...NICE JOB DEAR..KEEP UP!

Roopesh Krishna
Date: 5/24/2011 5:24:00 PM

Thank you dear

Anil Khanna

Date: 5/20/2011 8:03:00 AM

is it poetry that made you think romantically-i mean you were first poet and then became romantic..remember the bollywood song from tittle "karz""pahle toh main shayar tha,aashiq banaya aapne"intersting poem.thanks for your review.

Roopesh Krishna
Date: 5/20/2011 8:07:00 AM

Maine aisa hi kuch likha tha, Mujhe laga ki ye website me dalne ke liye mera poem acha hoga..... I may have inspired with those songs, but I would like to inform you that these line are not translated for those film songs.

Carmen A

Date: 5/3/2011 7:46:00 AM

wonderfull, yet sad, goodjob.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/3/2011 7:13:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry today Roopish. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol

Anne Rutherford

Date: 5/3/2011 4:52:00 AM

Beautiful and sad but very well written. Anne

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/2/2011 1:21:00 PM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Roopesh. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol