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Alone

I'm all alone You relinquish me. The hurt, the torment it causes You do not see. What have I done to deserve This pain? To feel and endure this sadness I live in distain. To have a friend, that's all I ask. I'll act superb, put on my mask. Someone to talk to, to laugh with. I can only dream of this. My family, it seems, have forgotten my name. Friends have all left, not one remains. Lord, comfort me, I beg you please. I need a friend, someone, anyone.... I'm on my knees. For this contempt I feel will be my death. This unending sadness will lay me to rest. Please someone, hear my cry. Alone I plea, just one friend.... I sigh. I'm gone.

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Date: 6/11/2024 5:00:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 7/29/2019 12:53:00 PM
Hello Sarah Sutton, so nice to meet you. You are so depressed. I picked this up just by reading your poem. Things will get better. One day at a time. Welcome to poetry Soup. Have a nice day my friend. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
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Date: 7/23/2019 5:26:00 PM
Sorry to see someone so down in their life. This has a lot of feeling in it. Thanks for your comment on my poem and if this is your first time here, may you find many friends!
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Date: 7/23/2019 12:45:00 PM
This piece brings to mind the story of Job. Rest assured that you are not alone. Blessings Rick, welcome to poetry soup.
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Date: 7/10/2019 8:54:00 PM
Blessings for friendship your way and enjoy poetry soup, Keep writing poetry :)
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Date: 7/4/2019 2:30:00 PM
Put on your mask, keep writing poetry, don't go away. Poetrysoup wants you, Sarah)
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Date: 7/4/2019 11:46:00 AM
Sarah, a sad write. It seems like you have been through this pain. Great job with the writing of this. I would have typed it free verse. Nice one. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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