Alone

none to give advice no one to say you look nice alone pay the price

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James Horn

Date: 3/6/2019 7:14:00 PM

Definitely in the form of a Horn haiku that rhymes. new what will suffice then encourage and entice should cut bigger slice

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 3/6/2019 7:35:00 PM

An addition of 3, a 6 line haiku, that rhymes. Thank you, James

P.M. Richter

Date: 3/2/2019 8:09:00 AM

Powerful haiku - I love it!

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 3/2/2019 8:53:00 AM

Thank you so much! Glad that you liked it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2019 12:34:00 PM

sadly true, Sandra

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/23/2019 12:47:00 PM

It is sad, and lonely.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/23/2019 9:32:00 AM

Yes, this is true. Well done :)

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/23/2019 10:31:00 AM

Thank you.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/23/2019 7:45:00 AM

Sad but true Sandra. Tom.

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/23/2019 10:30:00 AM

You're right Tom, it is sad.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/23/2019 5:41:00 AM

Aha, but I have a mirror, and she loves to compliment me, it is her favorite thing, Sandra.

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 2/23/2019 10:30:00 AM

Good to have such a complimentary mirror, she is an awesome find.