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Almost Something

I worship not with hymns or knees, but in the rustle of the trees, in socks that vanish in the wash, and toast that lands, of course, jam-squash. I’ve built a chapel in my brain, with pews of doubt and tea-stained rain, a steeple made of “Could be, though,” and sermons whispered soft and low. No angels here, no Book of Rules— just dreams that argue with the schools, and stars that blink in Morse-code blips while comets draft apocalypse. I don’t believe in bearded skies, but I suspect the moon tells lies. And when my cat begins to stare, I think—somebody might be there. Not God with thunder, plagues, or plan, but Something odd that tickles man. It hums inside a crusty roll, then vanishes—like half the soul. So here I stand—no robes, no creed— just wonder, stitched to human need. I light a match. The dark replies. And somewhere, Something rolls its eyes.

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Date: 5/18/2025 8:21:00 PM
Going right into my favs- <3
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/19/2025 1:37:00 PM
That means so much—thank you. I’m really glad it resonated with you enough to become a favourite. I truly appreciate the support.
Date: 5/8/2025 2:39:00 AM
So simply and convincingly stated. I especially resonate with the last words. The answer to the prompt lies in everyday simplicity. Enjoyed this read today. ThkU Aaliyah.
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/10/2025 10:11:00 AM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful words. I’m really glad the poem resonated with you, especially the final lines. It’s wonderful to hear that the simplicity spoke to you. I’m grateful for your feedback and for taking the time to read.
Date: 5/1/2025 5:39:00 AM
Dear Aaliyah, Congratulations on your placement in m poetry contest. As I read yours I thought what a marvel-wry, wise, and quietly reverent in its own beautifully secular way. I felt seen in your chapel of “Could be, though,” where socks and jammed toast become sacred, and wonder is stitched to ordinary need. I thought you captured that restless ache for meaning without dogma, the hush of mystery in daily mishaps. I felt you lit a match in the dark and letting wonder answer back. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Crystol Woods
Date: 5/9/2025 11:40:00 AM
I just love to read your reflections on others poetry! It's so wonderful to hear feedback with so much insight and understanding. Xo
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/1/2025 7:51:00 AM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful words and for taking the time to engage so deeply with my work. Your reflection on the poem captures exactly what I hoped to convey—that delicate balance of finding something sacred in the everyday, the quiet moments where meaning feels just out of reach but still worth searching for. It means a great deal to know it resonated with you in that way.
Date: 4/30/2025 9:20:00 PM
A superb line of contemplation, honest, straightforward, sensitive, self-aware. A delight to read this morning, Aaliyah, congratulations on your win.
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 4/30/2025 9:44:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words. The prompt was such an enjoyable one, and even though I’m not entirely a believer, it was a wonderful opportunity to share my thoughts and feelings through the art of poetry. I really appreciated the chance to express myself in this way, and I’m so glad it resonated with you.
Date: 4/30/2025 1:20:00 PM
Awesome! I absolutely ADORE this poem! It's so human and real. Another fave from this just wow!!! So good! Xxoo
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 4/30/2025 9:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, that really means a lot. I’m still quite new to this, so the positive feedback is incredibly appreciated. I’m so glad you enjoyed it—it was a fantastic prompt, and I really enjoyed writing this one.

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