Linda Alice Fowler Poet Footle

Almost Lunch

Quicksand
Oh, man

Hold hope
Need rope

Loud yell
Tear fell

Not heard
Absurd

Swim out
I doubt

Loud roar
I swore

Bad bunch
I’m lunch

Just then
Came friend

He grinned
Chagrined 

He laughed
Held staff

Pulled out
Rude lout

He mugged
I slugged

Amends
Still friends

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Sara Kendrick October 21, 2020 at 7:18 AM Great work. These are not so easy to write so you are very good to come up with this many. Thanks for stopping by my work with congrats. Sara Linda Alice Fowler October 21, 2020 at 7:30 AM Thank you Sara. A pleasure to support fellow poets. :) Linda

Caren Krutsinger October 19, 2020 at 1:22 PM Fantastic footle! Love the theme and the compelling story Linda Alice Fowler October 19, 2020 at 3:46 PM You're simply wonderful Caren. Thanks for reading and commenting, Linda

Andrea Dietrich October 15, 2020 at 11:10 AM great job, Linda. Instead of "you're on a roll" let's say "you're on a footle!" Linda Alice Fowler October 15, 2020 at 12:46 PM Ha! Thanks Andrea. They are fun to write. Linda

Silent One October 13, 2020 at 12:32 PM You did these really well... Linda Alice Fowler October 13, 2020 at 12:46 PM I appreciate your kind comments. Thanks for visiting! Linda

Besma Riabi Dziri October 13, 2020 at 11:15 AM A poem of unique beauty for its concise flair and poetic tone! A pleasure to read your creative poetry, Linda! Looking forward to reading more.. My deepest regards and blessings. Linda Alice Fowler October 13, 2020 at 11:18 AM Ever so many thanks for your visit and supportive comments Besma. A blessed day to you, Linda

Darlene De Beaulieu October 13, 2020 at 10:20 AM Hello Linda Fowler, now that is a good friend.They will be best friends. enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu October 13, 2020 at 3:51 PM Hello Linda Flower, Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. Linda Alice Fowler October 13, 2020 at 10:43 AM Thanks for the visit Darlene De Beaulieu :) My day is brighter because of your visit. Linda