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Almost Lunch

Quicksand Oh, man Hold hope Need rope Loud yell Tear fell Not heard Absurd Swim out I doubt Loud roar I swore Bad bunch I’m lunch Just then Came friend He grinned Chagrined He laughed Held staff Pulled out Rude lout He mugged I slugged Amends Still friends

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2020 7:18:00 AM

Great work. These are not so easy to write so you are very good to come up with this many. Thanks for stopping by my work with congrats. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/21/2020 7:30:00 AM

Thank you Sara. A pleasure to support fellow poets. :) Linda

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/19/2020 1:22:00 PM

Fantastic footle! Love the theme and the compelling story

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/19/2020 3:46:00 PM

You're simply wonderful Caren. Thanks for reading and commenting, Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2020 11:10:00 AM

great job, Linda. Instead of "you're on a roll" let's say "you're on a footle!"

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/15/2020 12:46:00 PM

Ha! Thanks Andrea. They are fun to write. Linda

Silent One

Date: 10/13/2020 12:32:00 PM

You did these really well...

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/13/2020 12:46:00 PM

I appreciate your kind comments. Thanks for visiting! Linda

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 10/13/2020 11:15:00 AM

A poem of unique beauty for its concise flair and poetic tone! A pleasure to read your creative poetry, Linda! Looking forward to reading more.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/13/2020 11:18:00 AM

Ever so many thanks for your visit and supportive comments Besma. A blessed day to you, Linda

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/13/2020 10:20:00 AM

Hello Linda Fowler, now that is a good friend.They will be best friends. enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/13/2020 3:51:00 PM

Hello Linda Flower, Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 10/13/2020 10:43:00 AM

Thanks for the visit Darlene De Beaulieu :) My day is brighter because of your visit. Linda