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Almost Lunch

Quicksand
Oh, man

Hold hope
Need rope

Loud yell
Tear fell

Not heard
Absurd

Swim out
I doubt

Loud roar
I swore

Bad bunch
I’m lunch

Just then
Came friend

He grinned
Chagrined 

He laughed
Held staff

Pulled out
Rude lout

He mugged
I slugged

Amends
Still friends

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Sara Kendrick Date: 10/21/2020 7:18:00 AM Great work. These are not so easy to write so you are very good to come up with this many. Thanks for stopping by my work with congrats. Sara Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/21/2020 7:30:00 AM Thank you Sara. A pleasure to support fellow poets. :) Linda

Caren Krutsinger Date: 10/19/2020 1:22:00 PM Fantastic footle! Love the theme and the compelling story Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/19/2020 3:46:00 PM You're simply wonderful Caren. Thanks for reading and commenting, Linda

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/15/2020 11:10:00 AM great job, Linda. Instead of "you're on a roll" let's say "you're on a footle!" Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/15/2020 12:46:00 PM Ha! Thanks Andrea. They are fun to write. Linda

Silent One Date: 10/13/2020 12:32:00 PM You did these really well... Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/13/2020 12:46:00 PM I appreciate your kind comments. Thanks for visiting! Linda

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 10/13/2020 11:15:00 AM A poem of unique beauty for its concise flair and poetic tone! A pleasure to read your creative poetry, Linda! Looking forward to reading more.. My deepest regards and blessings. Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/13/2020 11:18:00 AM Ever so many thanks for your visit and supportive comments Besma. A blessed day to you, Linda

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 10/13/2020 10:20:00 AM Hello Linda Fowler, now that is a good friend.They will be best friends. enjoy your day my friend. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 10/13/2020 3:51:00 PM Hello Linda Flower, Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/13/2020 10:43:00 AM Thanks for the visit Darlene De Beaulieu :) My day is brighter because of your visit. Linda