Almost Enough

He learned the trade of punchin' cows
An' silence of the men
He was alone but so were they
Not like it was back then

Not like the days of sweepin' floors
In brothels and the bars
An orphan lookin' for a meal
An' washin' whisky jars

Now he crossed the plains wide and free
An' saw the mountains rise
It was almost, almost enough
'Til he recalled her eyes

She'd been sixteen an' so had he
They didn't know 'bout love
So they held hands an' talked all night
An' counted stars above

Then she was gone, just slipped away
An' he was punchin' cows
He had the world to call his own
With all the heres an' nows

An' so he looked at all the world
An' marveled at its size
It was almost, almost enough
'Til he recalled her eyes



10-16-20
Contest: Have You Published
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

Poem from the book
"Almost Enough, Cowboy and Western Poetry"    April 6, 2010
Amazon Publishers, ISBN 9781519762481
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Strand Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 1:26 AM
Larry,if youcare to soupmail a link to your book I'll happily add it to my thank my 'thank you line' blog
Bradfield Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 3:38 PM
Sorry to say the original publisher has merged with the big boys and I have three that I haven't been able to get since then. Thanks for the suggestion though. The title is Almost Enough
Banner Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 3:32 PM
Congrats! Nice flow and rhythm. CB
Bradfield Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 9:51 PM
Thank you and cograts on taking the top spot. Line tells me you're from Melissa.My grandparents pioneered Rockwall back in the Cicil War days, My mother and all y aunts and uncles were raised there
Carber Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 2:13 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win, Larry
Bradfield Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 3:39 PM
And a tip of the hat to your first place entry. Thank you .
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November 24, 2020 at 3:40 AM
I love this poem and would like to congratulate you on your winning entry into Line's contest. This is a wonderful write. I love cowboy anything :) Especially poetry. A fave for me. God bless you with many more
Bradfield Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 6:31 AM
Thank you Regina !
La France Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 3:29 AM
Larry, congratulations in Line's, Have You Published with this beautiful poem, each line, each word is amazing _Constance
Bradfield Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 6:32 AM
Thank you, Constance!
Agustin Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 1:29 AM
Wow! Congrats for sharing this. God bless you.
Bradfield Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 6:33 AM
Thank you, Beata
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