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Almost Enough

He learned the trade of punchin' cows An' silence of the men He was alone but so were they Not like it was back then Not like the days of sweepin' floors In brothels and the bars An orphan lookin' for a meal An' washin' whisky jars Now he crossed the plains wide and free An' saw the mountains rise It was almost, almost enough 'Til he recalled her eyes She'd been sixteen an' so had he They didn't know 'bout love So they held hands an' talked all night An' counted stars above Then she was gone, just slipped away An' he was punchin' cows He had the world to call his own With all the heres an' nows An' so he looked at all the world An' marveled at its size It was almost, almost enough 'Til he recalled her eyes 10-16-20 Contest: Have You Published Sponsor: Line Gauthier Poem from the book "Almost Enough, Cowboy and Western Poetry" April 6, 2010 Amazon Publishers, ISBN 9781519762481

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Date: 11/25/2020 1:26:00 AM
Larry,if youcare to soupmail a link to your book I'll happily add it to my thank my 'thank you line' blog
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/25/2020 3:38:00 PM
Sorry to say the original publisher has merged with the big boys and I have three that I haven't been able to get since then. Thanks for the suggestion though. The title is Almost Enough
Date: 11/24/2020 3:32:00 PM
Congrats! Nice flow and rhythm. CB
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/24/2020 9:51:00 PM
Thank you and cograts on taking the top spot. Line tells me you're from Melissa.My grandparents pioneered Rockwall back in the Cicil War days, My mother and all y aunts and uncles were raised there
Date: 11/24/2020 2:13:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win, Larry
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/25/2020 3:39:00 PM
And a tip of the hat to your first place entry. Thank you .
Date: 11/24/2020 3:40:00 AM
I love this poem and would like to congratulate you on your winning entry into Line's contest. This is a wonderful write. I love cowboy anything :) Especially poetry. A fave for me. God bless you with many more
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/24/2020 6:31:00 AM
Thank you Regina !
Date: 11/24/2020 3:29:00 AM
Larry, congratulations in Line's, Have You Published with this beautiful poem, each line, each word is amazing _Constance
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/24/2020 6:32:00 AM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 11/24/2020 1:29:00 AM
Wow! Congrats for sharing this. God bless you.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/24/2020 6:33:00 AM
Thank you, Beata

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