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almost

The streets grow loud with the tambour of laughter.
In the normally quiet witching hour, carols tumble, unplanned, from merry crowds. 
Even the stoic gendarmerie patrolling the Champ de Mars are showing their smiles.

For it’s almost Christmas.

Servants, having gotten their Christmas bonuses, 
practically dance the mahogany halls, 
crowned in festive paper ivy and borrowed silver bells, 
humming in merry misrule - as if all rank has turned topsy-turvy.

Downstairs, the chef (Julian) is in fine, bustling form, 
like a magician setting up a great trick. 
For things are getting serious - thirty Christmas geese, 
a ghostly-pale flock for feasting, arrived this morning, as did some 
very large salmon, crates of cheese, fruit, liqueurs, and champagne.

Peter and I were hoping for a calm Christmas day 
but that dream’s no longer in play. 
For on Christmas day, Grandmère celebrates brunch 
with two hundred and some fifty of her closest, most indecorous friends.

I’m the corrected granddaughter.

“Oh, you must come to this one,” Grandmère said, in an injured whisper.
I can’t resist that tone in her voice. “If we must,” I sighed.

So I will be, for a few hours at least, a reluctant holiday prisoner.

“Good,” she smiled, her voice restored in victory.
”I bought you a dress,” she added slyly for mollification.
My ears perked up - she knows the designers I like.
“It was just delivered to your room,” she said knowingly.

“Oh, who will suffer to rescue me?” I asked Peter, in mock drama.
“Don’t look at me,” he said, taking refuge behind a mug of frozen eggnog.
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A Christmas playlist for this:
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Fallica Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 10:56 AM
30 geese / 250 guests = 0.12 goose per person. No doubt Julian is up to the task even without your help. ;-) / My brother and I are spending Christmas Day with my nephew’s family. So, antipasto, probably lasagna or manicotti, roasted meat of some sort, espresso & cannoli at the end. / There's decorated & lit Christmas PALM trees here, and santas & elves surf the waves. Winter holidays are different in Southern CA. / I expect you’ll be busy the next few days, so, Blessed Be Anais. <3
Vionet Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 6:48 PM
Ha! Yes, the geese, which I saw, seemed straight out of Dickens - but when I tried adding things like briskets and hams it seemed to become more of a shopping list and less of a poem. Growing up, we would have the whole turkey feast on Thanksgiving but to do it again on Christmas just seemed too soon so we would have Chinese food and go to a movie on Christmas. The LA Christmas sounds like the Christmases in a Phil Spector song - which would have its own vibe. Merry Christmas, Vin! I have a poem ready to post on Christmas Eve but I doubt I'll be on much myself. Have fun!!
Parker Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 3:52 PM
You really do live in Austen's time...Joyeux Noël, Petite One. And for Peter, too. And Granny, indeed. And don't forget the servants....
Vionet Avatar
December 22, 2025 at 9:25 AM
Merry Christmas to you, Ario - and all of yours! =]
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