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Almost

I move closer to decipher the sound. It is the wind blowing across the lips of the morning moistened by melting frost. It speaks in whispers. My footsteps seem loud and echo along the walls of the laneway before breaking out into the bright sunshine. I would like to be silence, a blank medium on which every note of the morning is written, cupped to pick up the slightest sound, the breath of sparrow as it passes near, the rustle of a moth folding back its powdery wings and the pop of a bubble bursting on the still waters of a pond. There are countless symphonies being played that ripple across this absolute quiet, songs to ease a tear from my old eyes that I can almost…almost hear.

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Date: 6/19/2024 3:15:00 AM
Dear Paul, this is an absolutely breathtaking write. Full of glorious sights and sounds. I read it aloud - perfect for recital. The flow of the poem is so serene and although just gentle sounds of enchanting nature is prevalent, your immense awareness, sheer pure talent, rings out as always. Your poems come alive through the natural beauty of your skilled poetic words. You are like a lens, a camera that captures so much in a vivid, glorious way for all to enjoy. A true poet.
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/20/2024 5:43:00 AM
Your kind and generous comments dear Christina are treasured , thankyou. For ones poetry to be read and appreciated, to be afforded such positive endorsement is indeed a privilege and a boost to my confidence. Poetry is somewhat an intensely personal obsession, a closed room at times and to receive a note like yours lets through a very welcomed light. Valued immensely my dear friend.
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Christina Bowring
Date: 6/19/2024 3:16:00 AM
Loved it as always my friend and what an inspiration you are. Have a wonderful day :):)
Date: 6/17/2024 8:08:00 PM
'Countless symphonies being played! -- realization, precious depiction, inspiration. For this I thank you again and again. Upward and onward, Gershon
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/19/2024 2:10:00 AM
Honored to receive your generous comments dear Gershon, a beautiful gift that I value. Take care my friend.
Date: 6/17/2024 11:12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "Almost" write. Great Ending.... Have a blessed day writing away...........................
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/19/2024 2:08:00 AM
So pleased to receive your lovely feedback dear Paula....such comments indeed encourage me to keep writing away. Cheers, Paul
Date: 6/17/2024 9:48:00 AM
Another wonderful journey for us both Paul haha! I just love the last stanza made me feel emotional! Debx
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/19/2024 2:06:00 AM
Ah...chucks....makes me feel light headed dear friend...you are always a treasured guest walking the interiors of my poetry.

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