Almost


I move closer
to decipher the sound.
It is the wind blowing across
the lips of the morning
moistened by melting frost.
It speaks in whispers.

My footsteps seem loud
and echo along the walls
of the laneway before 
breaking out
into the bright sunshine.
I would like to be silence,

a blank medium
on which every note
of the morning is written,
cupped to pick up 
the slightest sound,
the breath of sparrow

as it passes near, 
the rustle of a moth
folding back its powdery wings
and the pop of a bubble
bursting on the still waters
of a pond.

There are countless
symphonies being played
that ripple across this absolute
quiet, songs to ease a tear
from my old eyes 
that I can almost…almost hear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Bowring Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 3:15 AM
Dear Paul, this is an absolutely breathtaking write. Full of glorious sights and sounds. I read it aloud - perfect for recital. The flow of the poem is so serene and although just gentle sounds of enchanting nature is prevalent, your immense awareness, sheer pure talent, rings out as always. Your poems come alive through the natural beauty of your skilled poetic words. You are like a lens, a camera that captures so much in a vivid, glorious way for all to enjoy. A true poet.
Willason Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 5:43 AM
Your kind and generous comments dear Christina are treasured , thankyou. For ones poetry to be read and appreciated, to be afforded such positive endorsement is indeed a privilege and a boost to my confidence. Poetry is somewhat an intensely personal obsession, a closed room at times and to receive a note like yours lets through a very welcomed light. Valued immensely my dear friend.
Bowring Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 3:16 AM
Loved it as always my friend and what an inspiration you are. Have a wonderful day :):)
Wolf Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 8:08 PM
'Countless symphonies being played! -- realization, precious depiction, inspiration. For this I thank you again and again. Upward and onward, Gershon
Willason Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 2:10 AM
Honored to receive your generous comments dear Gershon, a beautiful gift that I value. Take care my friend.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 11:12 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "Almost" write. Great Ending.... Have a blessed day writing away...........................
Willason Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 2:08 AM
So pleased to receive your lovely feedback dear Paula....such comments indeed encourage me to keep writing away. Cheers, Paul
M  Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 9:48 AM
Another wonderful journey for us both Paul haha! I just love the last stanza made me feel emotional! Debx
Willason Avatar
June 19, 2024 at 2:06 AM
Ah...chucks....makes me feel light headed dear friend...you are always a treasured guest walking the interiors of my poetry.
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