Allow Me To Walk With You

Allow me to walk with you

Written By Dean Masciarelli

Thursday, February 25, 2010


Allow me to walk with you through a different dimension

That is within our grasp deep inside of our own dreams

Where our imagination can create anything that we want it to 

So that we may join each other and walk side by side together

Hand in hand next to the peaceful streams 

And down by the waterfalls in a tropical paradise

That is surrounded by vibrant beautiful  flowers of every kind

So that we may inhale there heavenly scents and there beautiful 
fragrances

In a wonderful haven that would be nothing more then amazing

Where flamingos would stand and playfully fly around

And cranes would be frozen in there graceful stance in a different realm

While peacocks would be gracefully dancing 

And all the birds would joyfully be singing 

And beautiful butterflies would magically roam 

Where animals of every kind would get along 

Because it would feel like we were actually in Heaven

Allow me to walk with you through a different dimension

That is within our grasp deep inside of our own dreams

Where our imagination can create anything that we want them to 

So that we may truly enjoy everything that could be so pleasant and serene
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March 26, 2010 at 8:39 AM
A beautiful and vivid dream! Funny how when the right words are put together, it can create a virtual paradise. Almost a true to life painting. You have captured that here. Awesome!
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March 18, 2010 at 1:47 PM
Many congratulations on your win in Carol's wonderful contest Dean, a delight to read >> James
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March 18, 2010 at 12:18 PM
Congratulations for your win, Dean. This is truly a beautiful dream. Smiles, Dane Ann
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March 18, 2010 at 12:03 PM
Congratulations on your win Dean in my contest. Love, Carol
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March 18, 2010 at 11:53 AM
What a wonderful view. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Carol's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing. Karen
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February 25, 2010 at 12:26 PM
Beautiful dream to have. I can feel the relaxed spirti. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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February 25, 2010 at 11:58 AM
Dean, this is THE MOST AMAZING POEM YOU HAVE EVER! EVER!! EVER!!! WRITTEN! sorry about that I loved it! WOW! my favourite poem on poetry soup!!! love Simone
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February 25, 2010 at 11:06 AM
Allow me to walk with you through a different dimension you had me rigth there dude may words seek you out
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February 25, 2010 at 10:53 AM
This would make a very elegant entry for Carol's contest, Dean. Hope you've entered it! Looking at God's creatures, I often feel like I've been permitted to peek inside heaven. Loved your poem! Carolyn
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