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Poem written for and submitted to “1406 ALLITERATIVE POETIC Poetry Contest, Brian Strand Sponsor, August 23, 2025. Poem placed 1st in this Premier Contest.

Premiere Contest WinnerALLITERATIVE POETIC

1406 ALLITERATIVE POETIC contest ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ALLITERATION CONTEST – a poetic phonetic
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Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 9:23 AM
Interesting. It took me a long time to figure exactly what compromised the actual work you had written. Congrats. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 5:58 PM
glad you figured it out, Sara K....appreciate your visit and congratulatory words, Sara B
George Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 8:51 PM
Wow.....Congratulations on your trophy win dear Sara.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 29, 2025 at 5:57 PM
thank you for visiting and for your congratulatory words, dear Valsa. Have a splendid weekend, hugs, Sara
Daniels Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 12:26 PM
Lovely Sara ! Well done,Sweets. Very musical. Have a beautiful evening.x.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 5:39 PM
thanks for your lovely comments, Ghairo. I appreciate your visit today...wishing you a pleasant evening as well, hugs, Sara
Gauthier Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 5:39 PM
funny ~ well done, Sara
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 5:44 PM
thank you!
Beaufort Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 12:03 PM
Well Sara, you exhibit a sense of humor with this. I'm laughing as well at how short this is. Smiles!!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 5:48 PM
thanks for your enthusiastic comments. I'm grateful you liked this poem...I wasn't sure about it but figured the words came to me for a reason... :-) smiles back at you, Sara
DiMino Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 11:35 AM
Very creative! Brava!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 5:48 PM
awww, thank you Joe! Grateful for your enthusiasm, blessings, Sara
Poet Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 7:55 AM
OMG, Sara, that is so brilliant! Love it!  You totally nailed it! ??
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 5:49 PM
thank you, Sotto, for your enthusiasm. I wasn't at all sure about this entry but the words 'came to me' so I figured, why not?
Daniels Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 7:35 AM
Very clever, Sara ! Well done. Beautiful day to U & yours. X.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 5:50 PM
thank you, dear Ghairo. Appreciate y our support....wishing you a splendid Sunday, hugs, Sara
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