Alliterations Allure

The breath of Briance, I believe to be...
Life that my lungs listens to lovingly.

Like dawn upon the lawn, her yawn is drawn,
Surreal as fawn in sun that shadow swan.

She's the warm wind whose works heal wounds inside;
Drenched, pinched with french our tongue and lips collide
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 8:11 AM
Mmmmm! Love the taste!
Wesley Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 10:19 AM
That last line says it all Johnny, scintillating thoght to brighten my day!
Onclaud Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 11:50 PM
loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award,johnny!! :) huggs
Kendrick Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 7:14 PM
Good Alliteration..Enjoyed reading this eve..Subtle passion..Congrats on your win..Sara
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 7:07 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!------Lori
Freeman Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 2:29 PM
Johnny, Thanks for the honor of reading your poem "Alliterations Allure" , I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your place. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 8:51 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Johnny. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 4:26 AM
hey Johnny congrats on your win..David
Ramsdale Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 12:54 AM
A 6th place congratulations Johnny for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR
Sweetheart Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 12:50 AM
congrats Johnny on your top ten win with great Alliteration poetry luv..
Wesley Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 7:33 PM
OOOOOOh, that last line sizzles! Passion always makes the day (night too).
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 6:50 PM
ool lala you got that alliteration in, Johnny, I sure hope you made it in time for the contest becuase after your comment I had seen the contest was still open. Sorry I can't see more. Gotta run and make dinner now. Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 4:30 PM
ah the masterful word play is so ultra fine Johnny in this Alliteration entry.. luv the last line ..so sweet..so sultry..good luck in the contest.. luv.. the shadow swan is lovely too..
Onclaud Avatar
September 11, 2011 at 1:32 PM
this flows like a riversong swerving oh so fluidly.. fascinating, johnny.. if for a contest, a sure winner for me! :) huggs, nette
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