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Alliterations Allure

The breath of Briance, I believe to be... Life that my lungs listens to lovingly. Like dawn upon the lawn, her yawn is drawn, Surreal as fawn in sun that shadow swan. She's the warm wind whose works heal wounds inside; Drenched, pinched with french our tongue and lips collide

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/23/2011 8:11:00 AM
Mmmmm! Love the taste!
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Date: 10/21/2011 10:19:00 AM
That last line says it all Johnny, scintillating thoght to brighten my day!
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Date: 9/12/2011 11:50:00 PM
loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award,johnny!! :) huggs
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Date: 9/12/2011 7:14:00 PM
Good Alliteration..Enjoyed reading this eve..Subtle passion..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 9/12/2011 7:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!------Lori
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Date: 9/12/2011 2:29:00 PM
Johnny, Thanks for the honor of reading your poem "Alliterations Allure" , I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/12/2011 8:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Johnny. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2011 4:26:00 AM
hey Johnny congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/12/2011 12:54:00 AM
A 6th place congratulations Johnny for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR
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Date: 9/12/2011 12:50:00 AM
congrats Johnny on your top ten win with great Alliteration poetry luv..
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Date: 9/11/2011 7:33:00 PM
OOOOOOh, that last line sizzles! Passion always makes the day (night too).
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Date: 9/11/2011 6:50:00 PM
ool lala you got that alliteration in, Johnny, I sure hope you made it in time for the contest becuase after your comment I had seen the contest was still open. Sorry I can't see more. Gotta run and make dinner now. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/11/2011 4:30:00 PM
ah the masterful word play is so ultra fine Johnny in this Alliteration entry.. luv the last line ..so sweet..so sultry..good luck in the contest.. luv.. the shadow swan is lovely too..
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Date: 9/11/2011 1:32:00 PM
this flows like a riversong swerving oh so fluidly.. fascinating, johnny.. if for a contest, a sure winner for me! :) huggs, nette
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