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Alliteration Holiday

Labor day holiday is laughingly laborious Pack a punch of partying On one only lonely playful day Tonight the trio sets the timepiece to alarm again in the am another Work and school worry with the rules day Contest: Alliteration Sponsor: John Freeman

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Jack Horne

Date: 9/13/2011 10:38:00 AM

My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : )

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/12/2011 7:28:00 PM

Up on top with this work..Enjoyed Mom..Congrats..

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/12/2011 6:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!!---Lori

John Freeman

Date: 9/12/2011 1:59:00 PM

Doris, Thanks for the honor of reading your poem "Alliteration Holiday" , I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your place. Agape, Moses

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/12/2011 12:54:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Doris! Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2011 8:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Doris. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 9/12/2011 4:14:00 AM

hey Doris congrats on your win, loved it..David

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/12/2011 1:52:00 AM

congratulations on a great entry and win Dors. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/12/2011 1:26:00 AM

Congrats Doris on sweet success with this great Alliteration poetry my friend...luv...

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/12/2011 12:39:00 AM

A 5th place congratulations Doris for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/8/2011 11:47:00 PM

Bouncy and fun....you only got one day off? You probably don't even know how to relax either, do you, Doris? Nice title...set silence on your alarm. Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/8/2011 12:27:00 AM

what a cute title, Alliteration holiday! I love that line "pack a punch of partying!" Let's party ON, Doris.

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/7/2011 7:27:00 PM

Good luck in the "Alliteration Poems Please" poetry contest as John judges my friend. Cr

Nick Bagnall

Date: 9/7/2011 8:11:00 AM

Lovely choice of words in there, nice flow.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 9/6/2011 7:12:00 PM

"laughingly laborious" - ha ha. i bet it is for a lot of people. i know many people who spent their extra day off cleaning instead of relaxing! then back to the grind and all its worries, just like you said. so true doris. good luck in the contest with this :)