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Alliteration Holiday

Labor day holiday is laughingly laborious Pack a punch of partying On one only lonely playful day Tonight the trio sets the timepiece to alarm again in the am another Work and school worry with the rules day Contest: Alliteration Sponsor: John Freeman

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Date: 9/13/2011 10:38:00 AM
My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 9/12/2011 7:28:00 PM
Up on top with this work..Enjoyed Mom..Congrats..
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Date: 9/12/2011 6:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!!---Lori
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Date: 9/12/2011 1:59:00 PM
Doris, Thanks for the honor of reading your poem "Alliteration Holiday" , I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/12/2011 12:54:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Doris! Kim
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Date: 9/12/2011 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Doris. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2011 4:14:00 AM
hey Doris congrats on your win, loved it..David
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Date: 9/12/2011 1:52:00 AM
congratulations on a great entry and win Dors. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/12/2011 1:26:00 AM
Congrats Doris on sweet success with this great Alliteration poetry my friend...luv...
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Date: 9/12/2011 12:39:00 AM
A 5th place congratulations Doris for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR
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Date: 9/8/2011 11:47:00 PM
Bouncy and fun....you only got one day off? You probably don't even know how to relax either, do you, Doris? Nice title...set silence on your alarm. Gwendolen
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Date: 9/8/2011 12:27:00 AM
what a cute title, Alliteration holiday! I love that line "pack a punch of partying!" Let's party ON, Doris.
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Date: 9/7/2011 7:27:00 PM
Good luck in the "Alliteration Poems Please" poetry contest as John judges my friend. Cr
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:11:00 AM
Lovely choice of words in there, nice flow.
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Date: 9/6/2011 7:12:00 PM
"laughingly laborious" - ha ha. i bet it is for a lot of people. i know many people who spent their extra day off cleaning instead of relaxing! then back to the grind and all its worries, just like you said. so true doris. good luck in the contest with this :)
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