Doris Culverhouse Poet Alliteration

Alliteration Holiday

Labor day holiday is laughingly laborious
Pack a punch of partying
On one only lonely playful day
Tonight the trio sets the timepiece to 
alarm again in the am another
Work and school worry with the rules day

Contest: Alliteration
Sponsor:  John Freeman

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Jack Horne September 13, 2011 at 10:38 AM My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : )

Sara Kendrick September 12, 2011 at 7:28 PM Up on top with this work..Enjoyed Mom..Congrats..

Lori Lucas Mcclure September 12, 2011 at 6:52 PM Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!!---Lori

John Freeman September 12, 2011 at 1:59 PM Doris, Thanks for the honor of reading your poem "Alliteration Holiday" , I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your place. Agape, Moses

Kim Merryman September 12, 2011 at 12:54 PM Congrats on your win, Doris! Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown September 12, 2011 at 8:44 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Doris. Love, Carol

David Williams September 12, 2011 at 4:14 AM hey Doris congrats on your win, loved it..David

Joyce Johnson September 12, 2011 at 1:52 AM congratulations on a great entry and win Dors. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 12, 2011 at 1:26 AM Congrats Doris on sweet success with this great Alliteration poetry my friend...luv...

Caryl Ramsdale September 12, 2011 at 12:39 AM A 5th place congratulations Doris for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR

Gwendolen Song September 8, 2011 at 11:47 PM Bouncy and fun....you only got one day off? You probably don't even know how to relax either, do you, Doris? Nice title...set silence on your alarm. Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2011 at 12:27 AM what a cute title, Alliteration holiday! I love that line "pack a punch of partying!" Let's party ON, Doris.

Caryl Ramsdale September 7, 2011 at 7:27 PM Good luck in the "Alliteration Poems Please" poetry contest as John judges my friend. Cr

Nick Bagnall September 7, 2011 at 8:11 AM Lovely choice of words in there, nice flow.

Black Eyed Susan September 6, 2011 at 7:12 PM "laughingly laborious" - ha ha. i bet it is for a lot of people. i know many people who spent their extra day off cleaning instead of relaxing! then back to the grind and all its worries, just like you said. so true doris. good luck in the contest with this :)