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Allies

Why does the ocean instantly appear 
  more beautiful when you admire its grace?
Why does the timid butterfly draw near
  your hand, as you adore its wings' soft lace?
Why do those moments racing through the year
  slow to a halt as you look in my eyes?
Why do my life's distractions disappear
  when your warm hand and mine become allies?
When you gaze at the bright orb of the night
  why does that old moon speed my heartbeat's thrum?
Why does the future no more speak of fright
  as you, with optimism, bid it come?
'Tis myst'ry all, my love, that such as I
  should be the one to ask these questions, "why?"


// for Janet, my lovely wife and soul mate for 36 years //

written 10 Oct 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 10:45 AM
oh wow, yet another one I had faved!! Need I even look at the other four??
Horne Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 11:51 AM
what a beautiful, thoughtful write
Watt Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 4:41 PM
Jack, I've really been grateful for all the visits and comments today. Enjoy your day ~ John
Lawless Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 1:02 PM
beautifully written John, especially like the title....two together with one goal.
Watt Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 4:39 PM
John, i appreciate the kind compliment. Enjoy your day ~ John
Hamilton Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 2:59 PM
Another beautiful write and another great win, congrats John and thanks for your entry!
Watt Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 3:18 PM
Thank you John for contest and placement! Always enjoy your sonnet contests, both for the challenge to write, and for the joy of reading the winning entries ~ John
Kauffman Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 2:34 PM
Back with congratulations allied with my admiration for this awesome sonnet. Blessings!
Watt Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 3:17 PM
I am grateful for the "double play", my friend. Your support means so much to me.
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October 19, 2020 at 1:25 PM
A beautiful love sonnet you’ve written for your wife John, congratulations on the well deserved win. Belle
Watt Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 2:14 PM
I'm so grateful for your kind words, Belle. Enjoy your day ~ John
Watson Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 12:46 PM
Hello John The first line took me back to the Carpenters' song 'Close to you' with its opening 'Why do birds suddenly appear, everytime you are near...'. This is a beautiful tribute to your wife and it's not even Valentine's day!
Watt Avatar
October 19, 2020 at 2:13 PM
Wendy, I thought of that song too (after I wrote it and read it back)! What a beautiful love song that is by Burt Bacharach and Hal David, a mainstay of 70's radio. Thank you for the lovely review.
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October 17, 2020 at 11:00 AM
What an ecstatic love story - so tender so warm yet passionate as the heart races and loving couples become allies - why, i'm sure because this love seems so true that there is no need for words, her hand in yours says it all. Good luck in the contest John dear friend, a beautiful poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Watt Avatar
October 17, 2020 at 9:26 PM
Jennifer, you have been so good to me today with all the reads and kind words. Your encouragement really has filled my cup. I'm glad you enjoyed this one, I can tell you're a romantic, as am I!
Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 1:03 PM
this is one of your best sonnets, John. VERY well written and tender love sonnet. A fave (not sure, but do you mean its in line two?) FAVE
Watt Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:49 PM
Thanks for the fave and the sharp eye. I fixed the error you caught, but the sponsor has already read the poem, so if I get docked, I get docked. I need to be a better proofreader! Grateful for your generous review, Andrea.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 12:47 PM
Romance swells within the arms of nature’s beauty. A gorgeous sonnet my friend. I love this! Blessings xxoo
Watt Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 3:05 PM
Thank you, Connie. A love of nature is a big part of our common ground... flowers, full moon rises, watching the ocean waves, butterflies. Loved your comment. Hugs ~ John
Mcintosh Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 12:42 PM
Lovely words, dear friend. A blessing that whispers of hope and grace and faith in the heart! I enjoyed this so much
Watt Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 3:03 PM
Thank you, Gina. Blessing is a great word to describe this love. I've been so fortunate. Blessings to you as well ~ John
Cunningham Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 11:35 AM
Beautifully composed John, oozing with love and romance. Good luck in the contest Tom
Watt Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 3:01 PM
Thank you, Tom. I'm so grateful this is not a fiction write. I got the winning lottery ticket when I married my bride 35 years ago. ~ John
Kauffman Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 10:04 AM
John, you have so beautifully addressed the age old question of lovers - how could I be so lucky to have your love! The image of two hands becoming "allies" is very special and I really like the parallelism. Best wishes and blessings my friend, for the contest!
Watt Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 3:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comment, Sam. I'm in awe of the gift I have received with my bride's love and acceptance. I'm glad you liked the word "allies"; as soon as I penned it I felt that should be the title. Blessings to you ~ John
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October 11, 2020 at 9:28 AM
The mystery of love, so beautifully expressed - my favorite is the part of optimistically seeking the future. Yes, we should be allies with our better half, that is what makes it so special :) (do you show any of these to your wife - she would probably be over the moon!)
Watt Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:58 PM
Thank you, Michelle. Yes, love is a mystery, and the sense of awe that comes from being given that gift is nearly overwhelming. Easy to see why poets have been writing of love for millennia. And yes, Janet is a very grateful recipient of these love poems. Enjoy your day ~ John
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 4:04 AM
aww John so beautiful and romantic ... why can't I be so gifted as to write sonnets like these!:-( hugs Jan xx
Watt Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:55 PM
Thank you for your endearing words, Jan. I'm very grateful to have someone to write love poems to. Don't give up hope, with your immense talent, maybe there are sonnets in your future. It's always been a favorite form of mine. Hugs ~ John
Daniel Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 12:42 AM
A brilliant thought provoking sonnet, John:) and my captcha is YYY:)
Watt Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 2:51 PM
Love when the captchas are right on target! Thanks for the read and lovely comment, Jo. Enjoy your day ~ John
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