All You Need

Anger damps love,
peace above reigns..
White Dove rises
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 6:20 AM
Congratulations on your placement in ^Rick's "Than-Bauk" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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November 17, 2011 at 6:05 PM
Late congrats on your well deserved win, dear Deb! Love, iolanda
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November 17, 2011 at 12:49 PM
Good to see your H M Debbie..!
Mehta Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 2:16 AM
Congratulations this wonderful win in the contest of Rick, Debbie
Johnson Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 7:20 PM
Nice. Should have been rated higher. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 2:19 PM
YOurs is very nice, Debs. Is it just me? but I find this extremely difficult to do with good grammar becuase the form is so limiting. Congrats.
Song Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 1:47 PM
Ahhhh...the dove peace...an everlasting principle..the more I read you....the more I respect you! A positive approach to any situation. Love, Gwendolen
Guzzi Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 2:39 PM
the holy ghost too ;)
Song Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 1:47 PM
dove of peace
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November 16, 2011 at 1:40 PM
So uplifting, Deb. I hope people take these words to heart. Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest! Hope you have a happy Thanksgiving. Drive safely. Love, Carolyn
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November 16, 2011 at 3:31 AM
I entered this contest also Debbie. The form is a little tricky but nice when completed. Thank you for my placement in your Fall or Winter Haiku Contest.
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November 15, 2011 at 8:26 PM
All you need is love !! (ala The Beatles!)....love this one!! ps....thanks mucho for the haiku help....and very much for the placement in the haiku contest! I'm still trying to improve with your help :) It is much appreciated!
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November 15, 2011 at 5:23 PM
Wonderful message you have here, Debbie :) yup hopefully peace does reign-- btw I could be wrong, but I think for than bauk, for your 2nd line, the rhyme should be in the third syllable? Like a staircase? Rhymes found on 4th, 3rd, 2nd syllable? Hope this helps
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