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All You Need

Anger damps love, peace above reigns.. White Dove rises

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 6:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in ^Rick's "Than-Bauk" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/17/2011 6:05:00 PM

Late congrats on your well deserved win, dear Deb! Love, iolanda

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/17/2011 12:49:00 PM

Good to see your H M Debbie..!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/17/2011 2:16:00 AM

Congratulations this wonderful win in the contest of Rick, Debbie

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/16/2011 7:20:00 PM

Nice. Should have been rated higher. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2011 2:19:00 PM

YOurs is very nice, Debs. Is it just me? but I find this extremely difficult to do with good grammar becuase the form is so limiting. Congrats.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/16/2011 1:47:00 PM

Ahhhh...the dove peace...an everlasting principle..the more I read you....the more I respect you! A positive approach to any situation. Love, Gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/18/2011 2:39:00 PM

the holy ghost too ;)

Gwendolen Song
Date: 11/16/2011 1:47:00 PM

dove of peace

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/16/2011 1:40:00 PM

So uplifting, Deb. I hope people take these words to heart. Congratulations on your success in Rick's contest! Hope you have a happy Thanksgiving. Drive safely. Love, Carolyn

Broken Butterfly

Date: 11/16/2011 3:31:00 AM

I entered this contest also Debbie. The form is a little tricky but nice when completed. Thank you for my placement in your Fall or Winter Haiku Contest.

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/15/2011 8:26:00 PM

All you need is love !! (ala The Beatles!)....love this one!! ps....thanks mucho for the haiku help....and very much for the placement in the haiku contest! I'm still trying to improve with your help :) It is much appreciated!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/15/2011 5:23:00 PM

Wonderful message you have here, Debbie :) yup hopefully peace does reign-- btw I could be wrong, but I think for than bauk, for your 2nd line, the rhyme should be in the third syllable? Like a staircase? Rhymes found on 4th, 3rd, 2nd syllable? Hope this helps