All Wrong
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Man’s rules are long and arduous. God’s rules are mercy and grace.
Book of Jude asks when Christ returns to the earth, will he find faith.
In the following poem, the “all wrong” has to do with many decisions.
All Wrong
Perhaps you are all wrong,
Chanting a cheap imitation song,
Trying to peer-pressure-belong.
It’s the devils-sweet-song,
But eternity is hellishly long.
Think! Don’t just go along.
Don’t let deception be your swan song.
Your hot-new-home is not a week long.
Words of heavenly wisdom have a Shepherd’s hook.
Christ’s burden is light; heavy is the profound book.
It would be experientially sad to find you forsook
The greatest gift. Why not take a Living Water-look.
Step over the line of faith; have a changed outlook.
Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2024
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