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All Wrong

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Man’s rules are long and arduous. God’s rules are mercy and grace.

Book of Jude asks when Christ returns to the earth, will he find faith.

In the following poem, the “all wrong” has to do with many decisions.

All Wrong Perhaps you are all wrong, Chanting a cheap imitation song, Trying to peer-pressure-belong. It’s the devils-sweet-song, But eternity is hellishly long. Think! Don’t just go along. Don’t let deception be your swan song. Your hot-new-home is not a week long. Words of heavenly wisdom have a Shepherd’s hook. Christ’s burden is light; heavy is the profound book. It would be experientially sad to find you forsook The greatest gift. Why not take a Living Water-look. Step over the line of faith; have a changed outlook.

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Joe Maverick
Date: 8/15/2024 11:49:00 PM
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Very good lines Kim..Keep writing and Sharing.!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2024 6:52:00 AM
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Thank you, Joe! Hugs and blessings!
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Hilda Greenhough
Date: 8/15/2024 1:51:00 PM
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This is a poem with very strong words that base from the Bible. A lot of people do just go along with a crowd. Thanks for your helping words.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2024 6:52:00 AM
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Thank you, Hilda! Hugs and blessings!
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Paige Hind
Date: 8/14/2024 1:28:00 PM
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A deep poem that looks for answers, your monorhyme flowed really well, Kim- <3 :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2024 8:11:00 PM
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Thank you! I rarely write monorhymes but this fell in place :)
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Regina Elliott
Date: 8/14/2024 1:26:00 PM
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So wisely penned spiritual advice, Kim. Bravo! A beauteous poem. Have a peaceful Wednesdsy evening. In His Blessed Name. ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2024 8:10:00 PM
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I appreciate you, Gina! Bless you!
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Kenneth Cheney
Date: 8/14/2024 10:56:00 AM
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I beleive you are ALL Right in this fine monorhym. Enjoyed the wisdom.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/14/2024 1:08:00 PM
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I appreciate you, Kenneth! Thank you! Blessings

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