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All Up To Me

Left a little song today Cannot will not give it all away Thoughts be screamin, cryin, breathin, streamin all for nothin Or all up to me All up to me Can't you all see it's all for me? Inspired by the group Mother Mother His chord progression helped me think of a possible song. (:

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/11/2018 10:32:00 AM

Loved this sweet piece you wrote, Laura. You are very talented dear. I hope the group takes up your lyrics. I think there's a great song to be made with it. Thanks for your visit to my work. Hugs

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/11/2018 3:01:00 PM

Thanks for gracing my page with this sweet comment! It was fun to wrote a little verse. This group is very inspiring! <3~Laura

Justin Bordner

Date: 3/10/2018 11:34:00 PM

There is so much possible from your bursting heart Poetess...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/11/2018 5:07:00 AM

Thank you, dear sweet Justin. This month has brought me a lot of surprises. My favorite song artist has been collabing with his fans - he comes up with a chord progression, and he has them come up with a melody and verse and he finishes with a chorus. So it's like a mini song exercise. Very cool to me. I know of no musician who has done that before with their followers. I'm hoping to expand this song whether or not he chooses it. <3~Laura

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/10/2018 8:02:00 AM

Nice little melody...It's all up to me...With a great message...All the best L

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/10/2018 10:03:00 PM

Thank you for the sweetness! <3~Laura