All Too Rare

Humidity removed from the summer air ~ A respite granted that's all too rare

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/8/2020 8:03:00 PM

Woow! So deep and mind penetrating. Humidity indeed is removed from the summer air.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 6/8/2020 5:39:00 PM

Now that is a respite! I don't think we'll ever escape humidity where I am.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/8/2020 6:03:00 AM

Your humidity has been removed? I am ready to head for Chicago.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/8/2020 9:56:00 AM

It was only for two days of course, Saturday and Sunday. But was it ever welcome. The Humidity returns to Chicago today... C'est la vie. Don't bother making those travel plans! :) gw

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/8/2020 4:20:00 AM

humidity of summer- lockdown time of leisure- in between we are tiresome reaper

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/8/2020 9:55:00 AM

I like the way you phrased that, Mahtab --- 'tiresome reaper.' Great image, Mr. Poet! Thank you, Gershon