All Time Stood Still

All time stood still; he fell through air,
faces below, look up, and stare.
Each always a stranger to be.
While he ponders what they do see,
he's inclined to think they don't care.

Friends, family, thought he'd not dare,
now, as the wind brushes his hair
he feels at last totally free;
all time stood still.

Was anyone ever aware
the utter depth of his despair?
Everyone thought him fancy-free.
He's only just turned twenty-three
he reflected, mid-flight-mid-air.
All time stood still.

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Date: 11/13/2022 7:57:00 PM
An effective stop and reflect write. Good luck to you in the contest Terry for your moving words
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Terry Miller
Date: 11/14/2022 3:23:00 AM
Thank you, Hat
Date: 11/13/2022 1:50:00 PM
So sad, so young, and that's the worst of it, those around don't usually see the signs or have a clue of their loved one's intentions. Intuitively put Terry, and well written. Its left me with a lump in my throat. A very heart wrenching poem.
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Terry Miller
Date: 11/14/2022 3:24:00 AM
Thank you, Wendy for your very kind comments, a friend indeed!
Date: 11/13/2022 12:38:00 PM
An excellent, thought-provoking rondeau, Terry. This is an excellent entry for the contest. BofL.
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Terry Miller
Date: 11/14/2022 3:26:00 AM
Thank you, Milt, the space between intent and conclusion
Date: 11/13/2022 11:23:00 AM
Powerful and thought provoking. Well written :)
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Terry Miller
Date: 11/14/2022 3:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi
Date: 11/13/2022 9:37:00 AM
Your verse reminded me of Jesus on the cross. Did the surrounding audience did care, besides the few. Great verse with great description information, imagery, and feelings. . Blessing my friend
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Terry Miller
Date: 11/14/2022 3:27:00 AM
Thank you Eve for stopping by and for your kind comments
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