For Joseph May's Choose A Line Poetry Contest
All this summer day, my love and I have reveled in our beach’s sweet view. We’ve watched sea gulls soaring in the sky and we’ve splashed inside the sea so blue. We’ve jumped some waves and strolled in the sand, It feels so warm underneath our feet as we walk holding each other’s hand. I turn to you and meet your eyes so sweet. You kiss me now, and my breath you steal. I do not think I could love you more. We look far out. Oh, what joy I feel. "A crimson sky breaks the distant shore."
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