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All This Summer Day

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For Joseph May's Choose A Line Poetry Contest

All this summer day, my love and I have reveled in our beach’s sweet view. We’ve watched sea gulls soaring in the sky and we’ve splashed inside the sea so blue. We’ve jumped some waves and strolled in the sand, It feels so warm underneath our feet as we walk holding each other’s hand. I turn to you and meet your eyes so sweet. You kiss me now, and my breath you steal. I do not think I could love you more. We look far out. Oh, what joy I feel. "A crimson sky breaks the distant shore."

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Date: 5/26/2025 1:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your selection with this picturesque panoramic tribute to enduring romance and enchantment. Well done, Andrea Howard
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Date: 5/23/2025 9:18:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your "All This Summer Day" write again. Have a blessed day with your win...................
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Date: 5/22/2025 12:44:00 PM
I enjoyed this romantic write Andrea, Very nicely done, Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/21/2025 2:56:00 PM
This is so beautiful, the title fits, too...and the end just is perfect, Andrea...final and haunting
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Date: 5/20/2025 10:10:00 AM
Love the feel your poem splashed all over me! CayCay Soupmail
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Date: 5/19/2025 7:38:00 AM
Such a great rhyme. I'm jealous :) Lovely imagery though.
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Date: 5/19/2025 3:17:00 AM
Very sweet and romantic Andrea, sounds so beautiful!
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Date: 5/19/2025 1:54:00 AM
so sweet and lovely poem, enjoyed
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Date: 5/18/2025 12:17:00 PM
Such a sweet love poem! I choose the same line for my entry... best of luck! Xo
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Date: 5/18/2025 11:41:00 AM
"All This Summer Day" is a lovely write/story. Being on the beach sounds heavenly. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a lovely day writing away.........
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