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All This Melts

All this Melts My yummy favourites, Just thoughts and saliva drools, Oh that chocolate be it on cake or ice cream, It's just irresistible ! Frozen to the marrow, ice cream parlour of winters Bites of butter scotch seduce, Hot chocolate brownie beguiles beneath, As these melt in my mouth, I gulp to my soul's content ! Written Oct 27th, 2015 For contest by Olive

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Joe Maverick

Date: 11/6/2015 3:15:00 AM

A feast for your senses Dr, I shall have to some get myself ice cream at least..'

Gary Watkins

Date: 10/31/2015 10:57:00 PM

Congratulations, you have made me hungry! My sweet tooth is leading me to the refrigerator where I have a piece of cheesecake that needs some love.

Julia Ward

Date: 10/29/2015 2:42:00 AM

I am sure this will do well in the contest - good luck!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/29/2015 12:10:00 AM

now, you got me wanting to sample weets, dr upma.. delightful!.. huggs

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/28/2015 10:47:00 PM

Love this poem but myself I can not eat the sweets except infrequently and in very small amounts-diabetes put an end to my splurging on chocolate cake, ice cream and candy bars. A7.

Elis Artis

Date: 10/28/2015 7:10:00 PM

So creative and vivid! I can taste all that just by reading lol Good luck in the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/28/2015 1:55:00 PM

- I feel the sweet taste in my mouth just by reading this, Dr. Upma :) - I wish you good luck in the contest! - There are so many I miss here ...... "give and receive" is said ..... however, many who "only" receive - Thanks for visiting and comments on my poem today :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)