All This Melts

All this Melts 




My yummy favourites,
Just thoughts and saliva drools,
Oh that chocolate
be it on cake or ice cream,
It's just irresistible !

Frozen to the marrow,
ice cream parlour of winters
Bites of butter scotch seduce,
Hot chocolate brownie beguiles beneath,
As these melt in my mouth,
I gulp to my soul's content !



Written Oct 27th, 2015
For contest by Olive
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Maverick Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 3:15 AM
A feast for your senses Dr, I shall have to some get myself ice cream at least..'
Watkins Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 10:57 PM
Congratulations, you have made me hungry! My sweet tooth is leading me to the refrigerator where I have a piece of cheesecake that needs some love.
Ward Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 2:42 AM
I am sure this will do well in the contest - good luck!
Onclaud Avatar
October 29, 2015 at 12:10 AM
now, you got me wanting to sample weets, dr upma.. delightful!.. huggs
Lindley Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 10:47 PM
Love this poem but myself I can not eat the sweets except infrequently and in very small amounts-diabetes put an end to my splurging on chocolate cake, ice cream and candy bars. A7.
Artis Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 7:10 PM
So creative and vivid! I can taste all that just by reading lol Good luck in the contest
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 1:55 PM
- I feel the sweet taste in my mouth just by reading this, Dr. Upma :) - I wish you good luck in the contest! - There are so many I miss here ...... "give and receive" is said ..... however, many who "only" receive - Thanks for visiting and comments on my poem today :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 11:50 AM
Love this, so very tasty, love your way with words.
Trifiatis Avatar
October 28, 2015 at 9:03 AM
So inviting that I had the impression of ice cream melting in my mouth, Dr. Upma! Delicious! Good luck!
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 3:38 PM
a very yummy poem. ME LIKEY!!
Promise Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 8:31 AM
Yummy! Very creative and imaginative. Hope to see this as a win in the contest
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