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The White Charger White is the steed that gallops, sparks fly from his mane The rider reaches out to my heart, passion burning as a flame Entwined in hope, flames burn high, passion ever ascending The white charger gallops by now, passion assuaged and descending. My Mind Is Blank My mind is blank a sheet of nothing white as virgin snow Where is it now I am searching lost not knowing where to go? White and blank no thought at all what am I to do I know I’ll get my pencil out and draw a picture of you… White Wedding Pure white the ghostly figure, as it floats around the room It stops and smiles sardonically, at the soon to be groom. I see you are taking a wife; she once was to have been mine Well my friend be careful, you soon may have to pay life’s fine... The ghostly shape now pressed close, to the sweating groom “I don’t know what you are talking about- please leave my room.” Oh you will find out soon enough, after the vows are said... Then the black widow bride, will find a reason for you to be dead Her only wish is a wedding, a wedding all in white A husband she does not desire, you will find that out tonight Don’t drink the wine or take your fill, from the wedding glass Believe you me it’s not worth the risk, this is what has come to pass. The whiteness of her veil hides the stone heart of a killer The black hearted murderess, to her this is the thriller... To take a groom so young and strong, his heart he wants to give She will take it out of you, so be warned now - run to live. Well that’s his story and he was sticking to it as he left the church at great speed… © 3/10/2102 3 Different poems For the Whiteness Contest.

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Date: 10/5/2012 12:09:00 AM
Good morning to you on the other side of the pond. This is my last comment for this morning. I'm cutting out right after I finish typing. This is a triple poetic treat. All three were good for reading and admiring.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 10/5/2012 12:47:00 AM
Well I am pleased you cut out after this lovely comment, thanks Robert xx
Date: 10/4/2012 6:51:00 AM
all three are gems Mandy, love the flow and the rhyme also the story captivates.. excellent entries,
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 10/4/2012 7:08:00 AM
Thanks Harry my boy xx
Date: 10/4/2012 6:16:00 AM
I really like your story and it the woman who will kill cold heartedly like that is out there..Money is their god...Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..He is bound to like at least one of them..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/4/2012 11:43:00 AM
I think that I meant to say believe me there are women out there like that..Sara
Date: 10/4/2012 12:22:00 AM
AN AMAZING ADVENTURE MANDY .. WINNING WISHES FOR CONTEST LUV .. THANKXXX SO MUCH FOR MY FIRST PLACE WIN FOR MY ENTRY ON PD .. FEEL VERY HONORED AND BLESSED TO BE CHOSEN ..
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Date: 10/3/2012 10:24:00 PM
A well-written poem my friend full of emotions! I love it!! Congratulations and again advance happy birthday!! love and hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/3/2012 3:02:00 PM
I just loved your #3 and the word sardonically!! [on #1 line one you want ..his mane ;)] Light & Love
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 10/4/2012 5:19:00 AM
Cheers deb xx
Date: 10/3/2012 2:43:00 PM
Love the little conclusion you tagged onto the end!!
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Date: 10/3/2012 2:42:00 PM
wow,three great poems using the theme of white. this is one I want to try now!!! thanks for the inspiration, Golden girl!!
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Date: 10/3/2012 7:24:00 AM
great write GG,the goddess of death all dressed in white,another victim of love,loved it
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 10/3/2012 7:35:00 AM
Thanks Richard xx

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