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All Things Can Tempt Me

All things can tempt me from composing words I long to write praising these carefree birds. A nice sonnet by noon could be achieved, But first my bladder needs to be relieved! Oh wait, there’s gardening that must be done, Plus meals. Then chores – the enemy of fun. In time, the supper bell has beckoned me, Followed by News and Wheel and Jeopardy. Bedtime! Line 1 alone is done; such sorrow - I’ll have to write the next thirteen tomorrow.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/18/2020 10:29:00 PM

So delightful, my friend. Well composed with such wit - just made me nod my head and smile. Congratulations!

John Watt
Date: 3/18/2020 11:01:00 PM

My same reaction to your winner, Sam. Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Take care with your 'shelter in place' Hugs ~ John

Sandra Adams

Date: 3/11/2020 8:57:00 PM

you did a great job with this one...I haven't had much time for writing or commenting lately but enjoyed reading yours tonight! hugs

John Watt
Date: 3/11/2020 10:06:00 PM

Sandra, I'm touched that you would drop by on your busy week for a visit. Grateful hugs ~ John

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 3/11/2020 5:11:00 PM

Great poem! Well done. Must be amongst the tops!

John Watt
Date: 3/11/2020 7:59:00 PM

Thank you Krish!

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/10/2020 9:03:00 PM

This is such a clever and wonderful poem, John. You have me smiling because I can so relate. A pleasure to read. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

John Watt
Date: 3/10/2020 10:35:00 PM

Your smile has given me a smile, Susan. Glad you could relate! Hugs ~ John

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/10/2020 3:47:00 AM

Not true, John you have written a beauty here, love every word.

John Watt
Date: 3/10/2020 11:15:00 AM

Thank you, Harry, for your lovely comment. Have a great day ~ John

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2020 6:44:00 PM

Excellently done, John. I like yours VERY MUCH

John Watt
Date: 3/9/2020 7:05:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I think yours is more whimsical, but I tried to squeeze a little bit of fun in...

Kelly Deschler

Date: 3/9/2020 5:34:00 PM

Yes indeed, we all could use a little more time for writing... Every poet, including myself, can surely relate to this poem... Great work John!

John Watt
Date: 3/9/2020 7:03:00 PM

Thank you Kelly for finding this so relateable and for the kind comment. Good luck to you with your writing ~ John

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/9/2020 4:18:00 PM

John, such a nice penned piece showing how so many things can lead us astray. Good rhyme and flow too, a really nice read. Blessings, Gordon

John Watt
Date: 3/9/2020 7:06:00 PM

I thank you from across a continent and a little pond called the Atlantic. You are kind. Blessings to you ~ John

Constance La France

Date: 3/9/2020 11:24:00 AM

John, I just loved this poem, serious but tinged with great humor and so true, a zillion things are leading us astray, a winner to me _Constance

John Watt
Date: 3/9/2020 11:57:00 AM

Thank you, dear Constance. Humor helps us make it through.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/8/2020 11:51:00 AM

This reminds me of - me! Especially love the last line (I have a bad habit of procrastination, so that one especially resonates!)

John Watt
Date: 3/8/2020 10:21:00 PM

Always nice to know I have reminded someone of themself! Appreciate the read and comment ~ John

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/8/2020 7:30:00 AM

This was a fun one, John, and I need cheering up, (as you are the only person commenting on my poems for the most part) ... great stuff, keep up the good work! Not sure I'll be here much longer ... the discouragement is weighing heavy. Blessings, Poet.

John Watt
Date: 3/8/2020 10:20:00 PM

Hi Bard, I greatly appreciate your comments today. Sorry to hear you are feeling down. I sent you a soupmail in case you wish to elaborate. Fondly ~ John

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/7/2020 10:36:00 PM

:) So cute and clever you are. Your thoughts bring a smile and a giggle, at the same time. You will get that poem done- eventually. I love everything about this. :) Brandy

John Watt
Date: 3/7/2020 10:44:00 PM

Thank you, dear friend. Your thoughts bring a smile.