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All the Pieces

ALL THE PIECES
Fragments and crumbs of life, all the pieces… That fateful 1990, I left pieces of my heart behind Without a kiss, I fearlessly rushed to the plane Full of dreams and promises… My heart fragmented, nonetheless, I did not look back As the plane ascends with its mighty roar so as my dreams I somehow manage to chat with my brain Into the clouds of uncertainties. The crumbs, the fragments, all the pieces of my heart Were scattered, irretrievable for long agonizing years. I wish I would have known then what I knew now, I should not have left, I should have hold you tight all day all night Forever till eternity. All the pieces, fragments and crumbs of my life I vacuumed them piece by piece back into my heart I recycled them into A spectacular piece of artwork My love, my poetry.
Dalila Agtani 6/23/01 Entered in a Contest All The Pieces Sponsored by Constance La France A Rambling Poet

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Date: 6/27/2011 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "All The Little Pieces" contest Dalila. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 12:26:00 AM
Writing is such a powerful healing thing as you have so beautifully conveyed in this free verse. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Dalila. Lainie
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Date: 6/24/2011 10:46:00 PM
sensational, dalila.. proud to be pinoy! my happy congrats on your sparkling win..:) huggs
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Date: 6/24/2011 8:36:00 PM
I love how you made your poem be a love poem and how one event was the onset of the fragments you discuss here. and what a great way you resolved it by putting it into artwork, your poetry. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/24/2011 6:11:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of constance, Dalila
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Date: 6/24/2011 3:53:00 PM
Superb win and a wonderful write as well... Michael
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Date: 6/24/2011 3:28:00 PM
Congrats Dalila on a beautiful win in the contest with this elegant creative poetry .. expressions and imagery blended so well ..enjoy another fantastic win for excellent poetry my friend..luv..
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Date: 6/23/2011 5:18:00 AM
Aw! I can relate. I'm force fitting my puzzle for a heart as well. Nice write.
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