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All That I Want

Command me,
Admire me,
Worship me,
Believe.
Desire me,
Romance me,
Love me,
Please.
Don’t lie to me,
Nor, cheat on me,
Don’t hurt me,
Be true.
Adore me
Hold me,
Protect me,
Forever.

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Faraz Ajmal

June 20, 2017 at 7:09 AM

A very beautiful written poem, I really enjoyed reading it, you ve expressed your feelings clearly and that s what poetry is about however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them

Kay Roberts

June 21, 2017 at 6:38 AM

Welcome to the soup Faraz and thank you for your kind comments. Of course I will take a look at your work. We're all here to offer any help you need. Regards Kay :)

White Wolf

February 2, 2017 at 6:19 AM

Lovely light poetry, Kay! The only thing I'll have to disagree with you is on 'Command me'. So I chose to leave that line out for personal beliefs! So few words but the message is clear! Great pen!

Kay Roberts

February 2, 2017 at 6:39 PM

Hi Rick. I totally understand. I wouldn't want to be commanded either, to be honest, in any aspects of my life. This wasn't written for me. It was written from listening to a conversation between friends of mine. The only commands I listen to, are my own and even then, I sometimes ignore them..... hahaha. Thanks again for your wonderful comments.

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