Mike Gentile Poet Couplet

All That I need

Sunsets of ruby and emerald seas
     Sapphired moonlight that beckons with ease
Jewels that require no wallet of greed 
             Wealth is the mindset of all that I need

Turquoise reminders of nature’s parade
              Mornings to cool us in amethyst shade
Hues of the richness of all that is free
          Open my eyes to see what’s there for me

Roses that guide us to gardens of white
           Bees that provide us with honey’s delight
Songbirds that carry the afternoon breeze
                     So many favors that carry no fees

Fire of opal to warm hearts of stone
     Pearls of the wisdom for all that we’ve known
Sunshine of diamonds to light summer sky
        When will they notice, these fools such as I

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Jennifer Proxenos February 17, 2024 at 12:57 AM You are certainly no fool my friend Mike, on the contrarary you a a wise man who can visualize all the simple things of nature that you need to survive on. I enjoyed the humbleness that comes across with this poem and congratulate you on your mindset. A fav for me, hugs and blessngs, Jennifer. Mike Gentile February 17, 2024 at 5:08 AM Aww, Jennifer, thank you xxoo

Panagiota Romios February 16, 2024 at 6:19 PM Really savored all the imagery that is a delight to satisfy, a souls inner thirst! For some reason beyond me, I can hear this being sung by John Denver!! Making this a Fav, Mike! I do not think you will mimd at all!)) Have a great evening. Pangie xx Panagiota Romios February 17, 2024 at 6:57 AM I corrected all my spelling errors in the above comment,do feel free to soup me in future. Am having some visual challenges at present.TY! Pangie R Mike Gentile February 17, 2024 at 5:07 AM I am so happy that you liked it Pangie, Thank you xxoo

Duke Beaufort February 14, 2024 at 3:51 PM So true. It took me a long time to figure out that the cultural influence of commercialism gives us a message that is not true. Money and spending doesn't make us happy. I got fairly well off for part of my life, and it didn't make me happier at all. In fact just the opposite. Mike Gentile February 15, 2024 at 6:50 AM Thank you Duke, I surely agree !!

Valsa George February 14, 2024 at 8:00 AM Well done dear Mike with beautiful rhyming and excellent content. A true gem of a poem. Blessings are showered on us and loveliness is around us. But we have no time to pause and enjoy! "Open my eyes to see what’s there for me" A beautiful supplication, applicable to all! Mike Gentile February 14, 2024 at 10:36 AM Thank you so much Valsa xxoo

Bill Baker February 13, 2024 at 5:44 PM Another FAV for my list, Mike. Lovely Couplet poem, my friend. The rhythm was excellent, the poem flowed along smoothly as I read. I liked your use of gemstones in your couplets. The closing line added a thought-provoking line for each of us to ponder. Well done! Bill Mike Gentile February 14, 2024 at 3:49 AM Thank you Bill, I am so glad that you liked it!!

Silent One February 13, 2024 at 12:14 PM I believe one of your best poems my friend.. a lovely poem with an excellent arrangement of words that create great imagery.. Mike Gentile February 13, 2024 at 1:32 PM What a great compliment Silent One. Thank you so much !!

Daniel Henry Rodgers February 13, 2024 at 4:58 AM Hey Mike, Your poem is a gem! I love how you show the world with rich colors and images, telling us of all the incredible treasures right before us. You've got a knack for highlighting the hidden wealth in everyday moments. And that ending! "When will they notice, these fools such as I?" It's a powerful call to appreciate the true riches that are free and available to all. Keep spreading your message of mindful appreciation, Mike! - Blessings, Daniel Mike Gentile February 13, 2024 at 10:37 AM Daniel, I can't tell you how much I appreciate your encouraging words! Thank you so much!

Gershon Wolf February 12, 2024 at 6:44 PM POTD? POTW? POTM? POTCentury? Wow, Mike. Right into my faves. Thanks, gw Mike Gentile February 13, 2024 at 4:06 AM GW, you are too much, lol!!!! but thank you so much and Happy Tuesday !

Victor Buhagiar February 12, 2024 at 3:30 AM Calling yourself a fool is only a ploy. Beginning with the marvellous colors of sunset, you go on with a wonderful poem of rainbow calibre. Well done. Mike Gentile February 12, 2024 at 3:48 AM Thank you so much Victor !!

Lin Lane February 11, 2024 at 9:51 AM Your lines hold all the beauty found in colors of precious gems, flowers, and even the richness of honey. Mike, your last verse made me think of the song, "Fools Rush In," but if you're a fool for appreciating and valuing everything you perceived as special in your poem, then I too, am a fool. Mike Gentile February 11, 2024 at 3:38 PM Thank you always for your sweet words xxoo

Vijay Pandit February 11, 2024 at 8:13 AM Such a delightful opening, my friend: Sunsets of ruby and emerald seas Sapphired moonlight that beckons with ease--shining brilliantly as always in your signature style, Mike. Mike Gentile February 11, 2024 at 3:37 PM Vijay, thank you so much!

Jan Allison February 11, 2024 at 8:07 AM an absolute gem of a poem, it makes you realise how bling we are to mother nature's beauty and your use of colour is so delightful Mike. the imagery reminds me of the song ;my favourite things! :-) happy weekend:-) hugs jan xx Mike Gentile February 11, 2024 at 3:36 PM Thank you so much Jan, a happy week ahead to you Sugar!!!