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All That I Am

I love him with all that I am ... Beyond the noise and hype of this world Beyond the ebb and flow of ocean tides Beyond all the hurt and pain we have borne Beyond the dereliction and abuse Beyond the bias and disrespect Beyond the abandonment The disparagement, the scorn I honor him, his beautiful spirit, and his heart And ‘though tomorrow is not promised to him and me As far as my heart does know, I will love him to infinity ~*~

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Jimmy Anderson

Date: 6/4/2010 11:30:00 AM

Nice 6th place win..this is a beautiful poem:) Love, your JAM

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 6:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Breathtaking Love" Audrey. Love, Carol

Margaret Foster

Date: 5/16/2010 6:47:00 PM

Congratulations Audrey. What a great write, well deserved win...cheers Maggie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/16/2010 5:16:00 PM

Well I am not surprised at all that this winning poem has received recognition in the contest about luv... another wonderful win my dear BBF for u to enjoy ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 2/28/2010 2:42:00 PM

Hola Mi Amiga....this one was great, I must let my girl read this lol... I enjoyed reading this one...very beautiful and filled with love and care :) God bless you and the person on whom you have written this amazing poem.

Michelle Norvell

Date: 2/9/2010 10:58:00 AM

i love this. its true and well written. great job and good work!

Katy Fulton

Date: 1/22/2010 3:11:00 PM

very true and beautiful. thanks for sharing =)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/15/2010 3:51:00 AM

Audrey, It is funny how love lives in a heart even after so many bad experiences. Your heartfelt poem is well written and captures the emotion. God be with you and yours. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Joanna Smith

Date: 1/14/2010 11:52:00 AM

this poem is beautiful i think of my husband, i love it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2010 9:18:00 AM

ME gusta!!! Luv, andrea

Daver Austin

Date: 1/13/2010 12:38:00 PM

I'd say Popi is a lucky man. Good write. Love, daver

Dean Masciarelli

Date: 1/13/2010 11:22:00 AM

Audrey it all starts with a glimmer of hope and then everything begins its journey and destiny reaches out to you with a promise of infinity and forever and a day and my greatest wishes go out to you because he sounds like he may be your twin flame or like many people would say your soul mate,Thank you for sharing your heart strings with all of us here in poetry soup through your soul prints in poetry I enjoyed my visit today, Dean

Kevin Elmore

Date: 1/13/2010 6:55:00 AM

good poem. Love is sacred so dont lose it

Danielle Knox

Date: 1/13/2010 6:37:00 AM

This is a great poem! It is full of thought and emotion! Good write -Danielle-

Kelly Zakerski

Date: 1/13/2010 2:31:00 AM

Dear Audrey - GREAT write!!! Yes...we seem to be in the same boat. I never received your email. you can email me at kzak4151@yahoo.com. Would love to talk anytime! Kelly

Brian Strand

Date: 1/13/2010 12:10:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Audrey.Rgds Brian

Elaine George

Date: 1/12/2010 5:03:00 PM

Beautiful expression of love, Audrey. For Popi with much love. Very tocuhing and endearing. Thank you for sharing. Love, Lainie

Stephen Mark Hluchnik

Date: 1/12/2010 11:04:00 AM

That's beautiful.

Edward Orozco

Date: 1/12/2010 9:57:00 AM

Hermoso poema! Gracias- edward

Bryan Bolton

Date: 1/11/2010 5:35:00 PM

beautiful poem :) To answer your question on mine, its done she know how I feel but has moved on, for me the writing is therupeutic thanks for the comments

John Freeman

Date: 1/11/2010 5:29:00 PM

Beautiful expressions of love for your man Audrey. Sinceramente, Amor, El Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/11/2010 3:28:00 PM

There are never any promises of tomorrows, so it's good that you were able to express your affection today. In spite of any hardships you face, your love endures. Marvelous! Great poetry, Audrey! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2010 2:59:00 PM

Beautiful write in this one. I could go several different ways in the interpertation. Sounds mostly though a poem about unconditional love or Agape love. Sara

James Fraser

Date: 1/11/2010 2:35:00 PM

Gorgeous piece Audrey >> James

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

Date: 1/11/2010 9:09:00 AM

This really makes me feel your love. Great poem. Thanks for sharing it and for reading my poetry. Your comments are very respected and appreciated. From one poet to another - Have a blessed day! Scarlett