Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Couplet

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- All Tears Floats Into the Ocean -

Of fire and colors a cosmic dimension is reflected
by your heart flame of polished silver

The stars shine sharply, sweet thoughts in a dream
Which travel through the vast heaven

Like the river flows safely to the sea
Why is the sea salty - perhaps tears of grief, loss and longing

These are the thoughts that fill my sleepless nights
If the dreams drift away, my passion will die















24.01.2018
(unrhymed couplets)
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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3rd place in contest

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Subimal Sinha-Roy March 21, 2018 at 12:16 AM Congratulations, Anne-Lise on your fine win.

Bartholomew Williams March 18, 2018 at 11:28 AM Congratulations on a very thought-provoking poem, Anne-Lise (Sunshine Smile; love that handle! :) ), and your high placement in the contest. Blessings to you! :) Bartholomew Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2018 at 12:30 PM - Many thanks for your comment and congratulations, Bartholomew :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden March 18, 2018 at 3:01 AM Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win, Anne-Lise - blessings and best wishes to you, friend! :-) Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2018 at 7:26 AM - Thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sakshi Singh March 18, 2018 at 12:10 AM Heart touching! Congrats on winning! Have an amazing day! :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2018 at 7:25 AM - Sakshi, thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper March 17, 2018 at 7:28 PM Sunshine, very well done and enjoyed reading.. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`* Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2018 at 7:25 AM - Thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus March 17, 2018 at 2:47 PM A lovely poem in which all four couplets stand out with head held high, Anne-Lise! May passion's flames keep you faithful company:) Congrats on your fine win...hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2018 at 2:53 PM - Thank you for your friendly visit, great comment and congratulations, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy March 17, 2018 at 2:25 PM VERY lovely, Anne-Lise. CONGRATS! Janice Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2018 at 2:45 PM - Thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier March 17, 2018 at 10:01 AM A sweet evocative poem, Sunshine. Lovely. Congrats. Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2018 at 2:44 PM - Thank you very much,   Line :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy February 1, 2018 at 2:24 PM Very nice and smooth read. Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2018 at 2:32 PM - Appreciate the lovely feedback Abdullah, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams January 31, 2018 at 6:55 AM Yes as long as we have beautiful dreams like these Anne-Lise, who can blame us for sleeping in? A lovely write my friend....Maria xxx Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2018 at 2:31 PM - Thanks for the lovely comment, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Francis J Grasso January 29, 2018 at 10:28 AM Beautiful, Sunshine. ...Fran Anne-Lise Andresen January 30, 2018 at 4:56 AM - Appreciate the lovely feedback Francis, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Swartz January 27, 2018 at 11:57 PM A beauty in longing for sleep. Images that stay warm help you through the night and this poem will help my restless mind. Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2018 at 2:35 PM - Thank you for your friendly visit and great comment, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu January 27, 2018 at 8:44 AM It is salty with yours and mine tears. Every time we cry we make the ocean, or river bigger. have a nice day my friend.. Anne-Lise Andresen January 27, 2018 at 2:13 PM - Appreciate the lovely feedback Darlene, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel January 27, 2018 at 5:50 AM Great thinking, Anne-lise, beautiful poetry:) hope you get your sleep back soon :) Anne-Lise Andresen January 27, 2018 at 2:12 PM - Thanks for the lovely feedback on my poem ... always a pleasure, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith January 26, 2018 at 10:02 AM so darling dear Anne-Lise Andresen January 27, 2018 at 2:11 PM - Thank you for your friendly visit and great comment, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kharma Scribbles Kharmaticrhythm January 26, 2018 at 6:37 AM This is gorgeous! I love Poe that incorporate the night sky and all of it's meaning! ?K.S Anne-Lise Andresen January 27, 2018 at 1:42 PM - K.S., thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper January 25, 2018 at 9:21 PM Thank you so very much, Anne-Lise, for the birthday blog.. you made my night very special . Hugs sweet friend Anne-Lise Andresen January 26, 2018 at 3:49 AM - A pleasure, dear Eve :)

Eve Roper January 25, 2018 at 5:23 PM Never thought of that , an ocean of tears .. Enjoyed reading Hugs Eve ~`* Anne-Lise Andresen January 26, 2018 at 3:51 AM - Thank you for your friendly visit and great comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman January 25, 2018 at 3:02 PM Love these Anne-Lisa, number 3 especially. Anne-Lise Andresen January 26, 2018 at 3:50 AM - Thanks for the lovely feedback on my poem, Harry ... always a pleasure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Melissa Tracy January 25, 2018 at 12:22 PM Captivating are your dreams! Beautiful write! Best wishes! Anne-Lise Andresen January 25, 2018 at 1:40 PM - Thank you very much, Melissa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley January 25, 2018 at 2:09 AM Oh, to dream such dreams, Anne-Lise. Long live your passion. Viv x Anne-Lise Andresen January 25, 2018 at 1:39 PM - Thank you for your friendly visit and great comment, Viv :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis January 25, 2018 at 2:02 AM May your dreams remain so we your poetry forever would enjoy dearest, Anne-Lise! Superb writing my friend, hugsxx Anne-Lise Andresen January 25, 2018 at 1:39 PM - Thanks for the lovely feedback on my poem ... always a pleasure, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Loughman January 24, 2018 at 8:45 PM “Why is the sea salty - perhaps tears of grief, loss and longing” ...beautiful line..beautiful poem! Great title too :-) Anne-Lise Andresen January 25, 2018 at 1:37 PM - Donna, thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing January 24, 2018 at 7:58 PM Simply beautiful dear Anne :) hugs and smiles :) Anne-Lise Andresen January 25, 2018 at 1:36 PM - Thanks for the lovely feedback on my poem, Akkina ... always a pleasure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter January 24, 2018 at 6:34 PM Profound! Reads beautifully, too. Anne-Lise Andresen January 25, 2018 at 1:35 PM - Thank you for your friendly visit and great comment, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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