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All Stirred Up

I think I’ve snapped My mind is fried I’m feeling trapped It’s why I cried What would you say If you were me Would you run away Or come and see I’d fix my mind If I could do it Should I unwind Or just say screw it All thoughts are gone My brain seems empty I am so withdrawn That I feel nasty All stirred up Like some big soup I’m like a pup Whose big ears droop I’ve lost my marbles From where they were All thought just garbles No way to be sure I am lost My path is broken At what cost Hear what I’ve spoken Here in my room That is so padded I hear a boom From someone added In my new home They keep me happy I always roam And don’t feel crappy Hopped up on drugs To keep me sane I give out hugs Out in the rain I cannot fix What is not wrong I’m in the mix Or in the throng

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/9/2009 10:31:00 AM
Well written poem, John! -Robert
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Date: 12/9/2009 9:38:00 AM
An excellent write, great rhyme and flow. Here's hoping you have a terrific day and one more thing by the way... Many wishes from me to you for great success your whole life through. Smiles from Lolita
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