All Stirred Up

I think I’ve snapped
My mind is fried
I’m feeling trapped
It’s why I cried

What would you say
If you were me
Would you run away
Or come and see

I’d fix my mind
If I could do it
Should I unwind
Or just say screw it

All thoughts are gone
My brain seems empty
I am so withdrawn
That I feel nasty

All stirred up
Like some big soup
I’m like a pup
Whose big ears droop

I’ve lost my marbles
From where they were
All thought just garbles
No way to be sure

I am lost
My path is broken
At what cost
Hear what I’ve spoken

Here in my room
That is so padded
I hear a boom
From someone added

In my new home
They keep me happy
I always roam
And don’t feel crappy

Hopped up on drugs
To keep me sane
I give out hugs
Out in the rain

I cannot fix
What is not wrong
I’m in the mix
Or in the throng
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dufresne Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 10:31 AM
Well written poem, John! -Robert
Townsend Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 9:38 AM
An excellent write, great rhyme and flow. Here's hoping you have a terrific day and one more thing by the way... Many wishes from me to you for great success your whole life through. Smiles from Lolita
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