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U p b e a t Left Right Kinda don't know what to do sometimes l i g F y n g n in my head i h e s s d e e a i h l k v l s s w i a p n i o L w s i a f b colored red in crimson blood . . . at Ca h m T e F r o m a L P e a a i d C A N nt That I washed all over my face so I could be b l i n d and not have to get feeling from the sights, that my mind didn't understand m-m-my mo-mo-mouth begins to mumble of thing i haven't heard of- when did the time go into my pocket that it hasn't even transformed as lint so I could touch it and it could remind me it could remind me could remind me remind me remind remin remi rem re r what was I looking for again?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/27/2010 3:18:00 PM
Hey Jessica, Thnx for reading and leaving a comment on my piece.....I'm asking Audrey to post this comment for me. .....Jimmy
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Date: 3/27/2010 2:37:00 PM
Wow for a moment i thought i had on wrong glasses...it is like a mues reading this and connecting the dots...intriguing style. great poem Irish
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Date: 3/27/2010 2:13:00 PM
Interesting design and write.. Not exactly sure what it is about...Maybe those thoughts that we get sometimes about a write that keep bouncing around...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work "The Mature Buck"...The dashes are for the reader to slow down...Think...The write was really about words and our use of them...Sara
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Date: 3/27/2010 1:27:00 PM
What a clever write, Jessica...you never disappoint! ...Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 3/27/2010 11:25:00 AM
Enjoyed this clever piece of poetry with a message , well done and thanks for the visit to my work Daniel
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Date: 3/27/2010 10:12:00 AM
So enjoyed reading your extremely creative write Jessica... lots of patience and care for this "beauty"...good job..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/27/2010 9:02:00 AM
very very nice well done loved it faleshia
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Date: 3/27/2010 9:00:00 AM
Very clever, Jessica. I don't know what I was looking for, but I still haven't found it. I can relate to the confusion you describe so well here! Love, Carolyn
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