All of Me

Disaster scars us from the outside in, got alot to say where do I begin,  from the neglect reject and disrespect when I was a kid, or the cause and the effect that made me who I am. To many stories I could say that would just linger in your brain, and at the end of the day you would contemplate on me being insane, you see me as i am from my name age and face, but if I turned myself inside out would you still say I'm the same. If you see the scars on my heart would you just throw me away, or would you accept me for my faults and my shame and my pain. If you crawled into my mind would you like what you'd find, or would it leave you blind and make u wanna run and hide. Would my thoughts scare you or give you inspiration, would they embarrass you what would be your implication. If I showed you my history and memories what would go through your head, and my misery and tragedies would you think I should be dead. Or would you tell me I'm cynical or pitiful or call me a criminal, or say I'm typical or hypocritical what would be your diagnostic be if I gave you the full visual. If I gave u a ride through my mind around and back, would you over react or tell me it's not that bad. What would you think if I gave you all of me, would you join me or just leave me be. Maybe one day the world will see, either way ill always be me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/25/2014 3:16:00 PM
I know a Man from Galilee who loves you just as you are baggage and all..Enjoyed reading ..Sara
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Date: 10/23/2014 3:01:00 PM
So deep and dark and so sad - stay true to who you are Jay - people only see us from the outside so they have no idea what we hide in our heads and hearts. Hugs Jan xxx
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