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Love is the breath of life.  Finding someone that you wish to give yourself to totally is a rare and beautiful thing, never something to be taken for granted.  I wish everyone that reads this could find such love and the joy it brings to life.

Take my hand and let the tingle that sent a shiver up my spine when our fingers first touched spread throughout my entire being until I shudder with pleasure in the joy of two bodies becoming entwined Take my heart and let the joy that your humor brings send me into fits of laughter until my eyes weep with happy tears that run down my cheeks blinding me from that which may bring us down Take my mind and sculpt it gently with your thoughts and let it bask in the kiln of love until it becomes as beautiful and solid as our journey together has been so far Take my soul and softly caress it with whispers that I will remember always as they become secret memories to bring a smile to my face and happiness within left to linger when we are apart Take all of me keep me safe and warm within your arms for without you I no longer have worth for anyone else as your love has spoilt me for this I will remain forever yours.

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Date: 1/12/2025 5:52:00 PM
Absolutely sublime, Ron. I enjoyed this. Blessings to you.
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Ron VanHooser
Date: 1/12/2025 6:09:00 PM
Thank you Edward! This was so intensely personal to me that it took me a long time to be able to share it. Comments like yours make having shared that part of me with the world much easier. Again, I thank you and I wish you all the best.

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