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All Not As It Appears

dust finally clears lies crestfallen amongst peers sunflowers worse fears nasty accident with shears fraid not ~ fell into arrears

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/7/2022 11:07:00 AM

I'm glad you stand tall with sunflowers my friend, yes we all have to learn to take the the good with the bad. Enjoyed your write David. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/7/2022 12:43:00 PM

Indeed I do Jennifer, but I’ve been cut down to size on occasion, fell into arrears, thank you for calling in, cheers David

Bill Baker

Date: 3/4/2022 9:30:00 PM

Interesting Tanka, David. It's true, we live in an illusion and miss as much as we see. By the way, what's a day without a surprise or two? Blah! lol Thanks for sharing your wit and poetry, Bill

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/5/2022 1:14:00 AM

Thanks Bill, welcome surprises are indeed always erm welcome, but such is life we must learn to take the good ones with the bad, standing tall with the sunflowers cheers David

Deb M

Date: 3/4/2022 9:22:00 AM

Very cute and cleverly written David….enjoyed! Debx

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/4/2022 9:32:00 AM

Heya Deb, never turn your back on a sunflower not even for a second, cheers David