All Mixed Up

All Mixed up. All mixed up Screaming…without making a sound. Wanting to pull all my hair out. Meditation does not ease the pain. Too much frustration is flying inside my brain. Insanity is where I want to be. It’s hard to keep a controled mined under these frightening things.

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Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/16/2009 12:03:00 AM

Breathe... feel a breeze... be week in your knees... ease your brilliant mind my friend. Your writing is powerful, divine! I'm in.sane :) We're all of like minds and amazing rhymes. Frightening, yes, sometimes... but sometimes, to ride the lightening, is what it's all about.

Shirin Neshat

Date: 5/15/2009 11:29:00 PM

I like it. I feel like that once in while. If you ever want to talk let me know.

Nathan Leccese

Date: 5/15/2009 10:47:00 PM

Very strong and brings home an important message. I agree with you on this one. I too feel this way at times. Very well penned!