Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- All Know Peter Daim, the Invisible Man -

You can see him
an invisible man
Peter Daim
is his name
He is weathered and gray
An invisible man
but you can see him

An invisible man
No one accepts him
But everyone knows him
Poor, dirty and unshaved
Everything he owns
he has in a plastic bag
His precious treasures
He's an invisible man
but you can see him

Under the bridge
where the shadows are
he sleeps at night
Invisible and just him alone
Peter Daim
has no coins
He lives of our
food that we throw
What we call garbage
Everyone sees him go hungry and thirsty
We turn around
Because he is an invisible man






06.05.2016
- Sun :) - Anne-Lise Andresen -
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Judy Ball June 9, 2016 at 8:56 AM WoW! There he is. I think I would take him to a shelter and see if I could get him some clean clothes, a bath and a good meal with a warm place to sleep. Even if I have to pay from my own pocket. Many of these people are veterans and should have better. Great job. A seven from me. Love the pic. JB Anne-Lise Andresen June 9, 2016 at 12:11 PM - I feel the same, Judy :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lenny Gazbowski May 14, 2016 at 4:18 PM We have a Peter Daim, his name is Bill. But we see him and when he needs food we, the community feed him. He's a talented musician, such a shame to see the talent he has go to waste. As for the poem Anne-Llise, it was a beautiful piece of writing. Anne-Lise Andresen May 15, 2016 at 5:44 AM - Wherever you live, you will find "Peter" or "Bill" - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Lenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich May 9, 2016 at 3:27 PM You did a good poem on the invisible theme, Anne-Lise. We can picture this man that we have all seen at one time or other. Anne-Lise Andresen May 10, 2016 at 6:31 AM - .... we all know him, Andrea - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rainbow Promise May 7, 2016 at 8:07 PM Great write Sunshine. These poor ones become "invisible" because we refuse to "see" them. Rather, we see right "through" them. Anne-Lise Andresen May 8, 2016 at 7:35 AM - So true :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Rainbow :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud May 7, 2016 at 6:03 PM ohh, this was visibly beautiful, anne... i see men like peter everyday and your work helps us realize to be more compassionate... very nice!..huggs Anne-Lise Andresen May 8, 2016 at 7:34 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Old Man Emu May 7, 2016 at 4:21 PM You have made him not so invisible anymore Anne-Lise, great poem and subject. Regard, Craig Anne-Lise Andresen May 7, 2016 at 4:37 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Craig :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath May 7, 2016 at 11:19 AM Excellent invisible man. A great 7. Loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl Anne-Lise Andresen May 7, 2016 at 11:43 AM - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, dear Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis May 7, 2016 at 5:37 AM How many "invisible" men are around the world one cannot say. One thing is certain thought that the turn of events could make one "Invisible" overnight! A fantastic writing with an ethical overtone that we had better not to ignore! A seven dear Anne-Lise! Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen May 7, 2016 at 9:05 AM - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, dear Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Walter T. Ashe May 6, 2016 at 4:43 PM Sunshine, anyone that doesn't know or hasn't seen a "Peter Daim" doesn't live on planet Earth! You've written a real eye opener for all who thought that their eyes were already open! Anyone who reads this will now forever "see" the Peter Daims! A sad but much needed write! Anne-Lise Andresen May 7, 2016 at 3:54 AM - We shall see "Peter Daim" as a worthy human being, he is stronger than we think - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Walter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian May 6, 2016 at 1:46 PM Sunshine...you touched my heart. How true...how true...and how sad. This was very well written, dear. You have helped make him visible. Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen May 6, 2016 at 2:41 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Manmath Dalei May 6, 2016 at 1:05 PM Anne, Very nice creation. Well concept and smooth flow. I enjoyed. A 7 from me..........//:) hugs Anne-Lise Andresen May 6, 2016 at 1:41 PM - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, Manmath - hugs // Anne-Lise :)