All Is Well That Ends Well

( Contest name : Beautiful scars)

The day dady departed,
Promises were winged locusts.
Uncle pledged heaven on earth.
Aunt vowed I would be a prince.
No sooner daddy was intered
Than I knew khaki was not a leather.

Soon it was home alone.
Aunt melted away like snowflake.
Uncle became a needle lost in bamuda.
Like spittle that was out of the mouth,
None ever returned .

So wants adopted me;
Taught me to fetch woods for bakeries
And supply water to construction sites
But needs took me to school
Though in coat of many colours
And a gum shoe without any sock.

Wants and needs were not laissez faire -
They woke me up before cock crowed,
Slept only when the streets were desolate -
Often corrected me with severe hunger  
That today I offer people butter bread,
Seat and bouncing beds under ceiling roof.

But the children of Israel visit Joseph in Egypt:
There is hunger in the land says the uncle,
Give us a room to keep our heads says the aunt;
Then I look back in restropect -
Though dad's death is a scar,
All is well that ends well.


Kayode.
22/11/15.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/28/2015 2:32:00 PM
Kayod5, Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/26/2015 3:58:00 PM
Pleased that I can now return with congratulations, Kayode! Well done!! Regards // paul
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Date: 11/26/2015 4:19:00 AM
Congrats on ur wonderful win Kayode.. great pen!
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Date: 11/24/2015 6:12:00 PM
a powerful poem Kayod5 congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/24/2015 5:25:00 PM
Kayode..congrats on your win in my first contest! :) be blessed -lu *smiles*
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Date: 11/22/2015 4:04:00 PM
this one leaves a strong impression. So heartfelt it is! WEll done with this challenge.
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 11/22/2015 8:11:00 PM
Thank you very much Andera for the visit and your lovely comment, have a lovely week...hugs
Date: 11/22/2015 2:01:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem immensely, Kayode! Sorry about your dad's passing away, but then you showed that willingness to learn and work helped get you through life. Well done! Regards // paul
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Date: 11/22/2015 8:09:00 PM
Thanks for the visit and the lovely comment,have a lovely week Paul...hugs
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