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All Is Right

The moon, luscious drop,
soothing the chaff of day.

The stars, flocks of grazing 
glitters -- heavenly sheep
tallied till the dawn of
a new and hopeful morn -- 

Our Sun, drawing daily
circles, dearly beloved earth
life’s prime and central 
spark -- 

All is right, with God’s light and dark.

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Date: 8/15/2025 4:55:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Joe...love the unique descriptions of the moon, stars and sun :) - hugs
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Date: 8/14/2025 9:30:00 PM
Yes, we have shining spheres to light our way during night and all through the day. They are God's benevolent gifts on mankind. Beautiful penning.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/14/2025 9:56:00 PM
Hi Valsa; thank you. Have a wonderful day! Blessings.
Date: 8/14/2025 5:26:00 PM
soothing yet meaningful words. I especially liked the 2d verse...well done, Joe. Have a blessed evening, Sara
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Joe Dimino
Date: 8/14/2025 9:57:00 PM
That verse does seem to flow best. Thank you, Sara -- your encouragement means a lot. Have a great writing day!
Date: 8/14/2025 12:08:00 PM
Your "All Is Right" is a lovely write. I enjoyed reading... Have a wonderful day writing away............
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