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All In My Head

A loving person or at least I thought It's been said more than once that I'm not When you here these things a million times I think, are these your words or mine A terrible place to be put in, I know But then again I guess that's how it goes To be loved one minute and hated the next A person like you, what do you expect To feel like there's not more you can handle It goes from forest fire to a slow burning candle No more answers from life you can grip Like a waterfall that slows to a small steady drip My head that is spinning, will it ever slow down I once felt like a queen but now where is my crown A crown is exquisite, embedded with jewels I'm stuck with the one that says "only for fools" To be put in my place it's been said I should be Is this what life is or is there more for me To be marooned on an island, not discovered by one Would be my life's quest, or has it already begun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/25/2016 8:40:00 PM
Nice to see this new one from you SKAT
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Date: 4/24/2016 6:07:00 PM
This is a great one mom. Great job putting this one together.
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:24:00 AM
it's a write, I myself don't think I would call it poetic at all... thank you for sharing your thoughts. linda
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Date: 4/24/2016 1:29:00 AM
I'm not sure if I would call this poetic or more just that I rhyme some words together. Either way It's just my feelings put on paper and makes me feel better when I'm done. Thanks for the chance to allow me to do this :).
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