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All In a Day

I wake up and scurry. It’s hurry and hurry! First and foremost – take a pee! Cosmetics applying while minutes are flying. Check emails and put on the tea. Pack a lunch for the day that I’ll take on my way out the door as I go to my car. I must not leave late or I’ll agitate my boss, but my job’s a bit far. In class I am facing sweet students. Time’s racing. So much to accomplish by noon. Lunch time, I’m still going. I watch the clock, knowing of more things I need to do soon. Grades I’ll be doing with errands ensuing. I race to my car and head out. To the bank or the store; to the post office or some other place with no doubt. Have I time for the gym? Gotta keep myself trim. But my chores are all waiting for me. Some jobs get put off. You better not scoff. I attend to my poetry! The dinner needs cooking; at TV I’m looking while slicing and dicing, for I enjoy my tv shows. I’m NOT missing those - I can “listen” as through tasks I fly. My kitchen I clean well. Perhaps one more email? With my hubbie I’m all cozy when at last I am sleeping. Then daylight comes creeping. I wake and start over again! Sept. 8, 2020 for William Kekaula's All in a Day Poetry Contest 225 words by Wordcounter.net

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Date: 9/17/2020 9:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "I wake and start over again!" So very true until this year. Enjoy your wonderful win..............
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Date: 9/17/2020 5:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in this contest, Andrea!!
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Date: 9/17/2020 5:19:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful 1st place in the contest, Andrea :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2020 9:46:00 PM
I love how you rhymed "email" with "clean well". Congrats on your #1 finish, my friend!
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Date: 9/16/2020 8:37:00 PM
I appreciate the condense feel of your intrinsic rhyming scheme, Andrea, a noteworthy trait I aspire to emulate someday! Congrats on your honorable win, Aloha! William
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Date: 9/15/2020 11:48:00 PM
Brilliant ! So enjoyable....
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Date: 9/10/2020 7:12:00 PM
Never ending, this process is called life... luv Michael...
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Date: 9/10/2020 4:46:00 PM
This piece is the oozing essence of a day's labour!! Wish you a top win in the contest!!
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Date: 9/9/2020 9:57:00 PM
Hello Andrea … the style I enjoy most of all in rhyming poetry. This one of yours I enjoyed so much - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 9/9/2020 12:51:00 PM
All that in a day, huh? I'm so pooped out after the pee part, I can hardly do much more, except write a poem to beat yours! Tee hee hee, tee hee hee!
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Date: 9/8/2020 10:07:00 PM
Very cute and easy to relate to. Like all your internal rhymes on lines 1 and 3. This style FEELS like you're in a hurry! Best wishes ~ John
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Date: 9/8/2020 7:06:00 PM
A wonderful write. I can relate to it. I love the rhythm and the rhyme. There is a fast pace and I can feel my mind racing too! Best for a win though I expect this one to be at the top! Fave!
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