All In a Day

I wake up and scurry. It’s hurry and hurry!
First and foremost – take a pee!
Cosmetics applying while minutes are flying.
Check emails and put on the tea.

Pack a lunch for the day that I’ll take on my way
out the door as I go to my car.
I must not leave late or I’ll agitate
my boss, but my job’s a bit far.

In class I am facing sweet students. Time’s racing.
So much to accomplish by noon.
Lunch time, I’m still going. I watch the clock, knowing
of more things I need to do soon.

Grades I’ll be doing with errands ensuing.
I race to my car and head out.
To the bank or the store; to the post office or
some other place with no doubt.

Have I time for the gym? Gotta keep myself trim.
But my chores are all waiting for me.
Some jobs get put off. You better not scoff.
I attend to my poetry!

The dinner needs cooking; at TV I’m looking
while slicing and dicing, for I
enjoy my tv shows. I’m NOT missing those -
I can “listen” as through tasks I fly.

My kitchen I clean well. Perhaps one more email?
With my hubbie I’m all cozy when
at last I am sleeping. Then daylight comes creeping.
I wake and start over again!

Sept. 8, 2020 
for William Kekaula's All in a Day Poetry Contest
225 words by Wordcounter.net
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Goldsmith Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 9:12 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your line, "I wake and start over again!" So very true until this year. Enjoy your wonderful win..............
Ranaweera  Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 5:36 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win in this contest, Andrea!!
Andresen Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 5:19 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful 1st place in the contest, Andrea :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Watt Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 9:46 PM
I love how you rhymed "email" with "clean well". Congrats on your #1 finish, my friend!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 8:37 PM
I appreciate the condense feel of your intrinsic rhyming scheme, Andrea, a noteworthy trait I aspire to emulate someday! Congrats on your honorable win, Aloha! William
Singh Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 11:48 PM
Brilliant ! So enjoyable....
Tor Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 7:12 PM
Never ending, this process is called life... luv Michael...
Ranaweera  Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 4:46 PM
This piece is the oozing essence of a day's labour!! Wish you a top win in the contest!!
Laurie Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 9:57 PM
Hello Andrea … the style I enjoy most of all in rhyming poetry. This one of yours I enjoyed so much - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Norton Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 12:51 PM
All that in a day, huh? I'm so pooped out after the pee part, I can hardly do much more, except write a poem to beat yours! Tee hee hee, tee hee hee!
Watt Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 10:07 PM
Very cute and easy to relate to. Like all your internal rhymes on lines 1 and 3. This style FEELS like you're in a hurry! Best wishes ~ John
Rodrigues Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 7:06 PM
A wonderful write. I can relate to it. I love the rhythm and the rhyme. There is a fast pace and I can feel my mind racing too! Best for a win though I expect this one to be at the top! Fave!
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