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All I Think About Is You

Looking out into the setting sun Bright orange and brilliant red hues Mind drifting off in the distance All I think about is you Each day we are getting closer but you are so far away My heartbeat is getting stronger As I think about you I need your love to hold me up When life comes crashing down Make sense out of everything When all seems lost You seem true Looking out in the setting sun Flickers of hope I see Foreseeing just you and me In each and every dream My heart is calling you home Come slip inside my room Lay your head upon my pillow Waiting, wishing, wondering All I think about is you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/7/2015 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations for this romantic write, Tim!
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Date: 8/7/2015 12:48:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning masterpiece Tim!
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Date: 8/6/2015 7:55:00 PM
Tim. Congratulations on your awesome win ----------SKAT
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Date: 12/9/2014 2:36:00 PM
Flickers of hope I see, hope are a way of strengthening our souls. Blessing to you my friend eve
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Date: 12/9/2014 10:07:00 AM
Lovely. Hope all she thinks about is you also. Hugs Edith
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Date: 11/28/2014 4:56:00 PM
Just beautiful.
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Date: 11/18/2014 2:46:00 PM
ohh,this is moving... affectionately expressed with mellow lines, tim.. huggs
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2014 3:35:00 PM
Thanks nette ...huggs Tim
Date: 11/18/2014 2:58:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful and romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 11/18/2014 3:34:00 PM
Thanks Ravi my friend
Date: 11/17/2014 7:21:00 PM
Tim my dear friend, very romantic love sweet poem. Very beautiful! so much yearning and longing. A 7 for me! Enjoyed it! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 11/18/2014 3:27:00 PM
Thank you Dorian my sweet friend.. Hugs Tim
Date: 11/17/2014 6:17:00 PM
Beautiful, sad! I want her to be with you. Touching write.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2014 3:27:00 PM
Thank Maurice... Hopefully one day.
Date: 11/17/2014 5:42:00 PM
That is beautiful, every words filled with want. Very well said.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/18/2014 3:26:00 PM
Thanks Cas...hugs
Date: 11/17/2014 5:12:00 PM
I am so touched, until reading this I had no idea how much I meant to you! All kiding aside, this is an excellent declaration, I hope she excepts the invitation my friend.
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Date: 11/18/2014 3:22:00 PM
Lol...thank you my friend
Date: 11/17/2014 4:12:00 PM
Good tale of infatuation. Keep 'em coming! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/18/2014 3:17:00 PM
Thank you Matthew
Date: 11/17/2014 4:06:00 PM
Wow - gosh Tim I wish I could write romantic poems half as good as this - would be very very happy - 7 faves and WOW again! Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/18/2014 3:16:00 PM
Give it a try Jan....I'm sure it will be romantic.... Hugs Tim
Date: 11/17/2014 3:30:00 PM
Very beautiful my dear. Good structure and just romantic, and again, beautiful. -TJ
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Date: 11/18/2014 3:15:00 PM
Thank you TJ ...hugs Tim
Date: 11/17/2014 2:48:00 PM
Oh my my my..how irressistibly Beautiful,Romantic and heart captivating this is Coach.I love it,The verses so alive,a vivid imagery which takes me on a journey between your verses. Favo(u)ring this enchanting poem ,Sweeter than a peach! To my fvs!Charma. : )
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Date: 11/17/2014 2:54:00 PM
Thank you Charma..Irresistible? ...Let's hope so : ) ....hugs Tim
Date: 11/17/2014 2:12:00 PM
I saw the sunrise this morning and it was beautiful . . . you see the sun setting and love shimmers on the horizon and within your heart-words. Nicely done my friend.
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Date: 11/17/2014 2:21:00 PM
Thanks David...They both are beautiful and thought provoking...Tim
Date: 11/17/2014 2:11:00 PM
Oh, Tim.....it's a beautiful piece....Who wouldn't fall for that? Lovely...
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/17/2014 2:19:00 PM
Thanks Eileen...Who wouldn't :) .....hugs Tim

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