All I Think About Is You

Looking out into the setting sun Bright orange and brilliant red hues Mind drifting off in the distance All I think about is you Each day we are getting closer but you are so far away My heartbeat is getting stronger As I think about you I need your love to hold me up When life comes crashing down Make sense out of everything When all seems lost You seem true Looking out in the setting sun Flickers of hope I see Foreseeing just you and me In each and every dream My heart is calling you home Come slip inside my room Lay your head upon my pillow Waiting, wishing, wondering All I think about is you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nunez Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations for this romantic write, Tim!
A. Sharma Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 12:48 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning masterpiece Tim!
A  Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 7:55 PM
Tim. Congratulations on your awesome win ----------SKAT
Roper Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 2:36 PM
Flickers of hope I see, hope are a way of strengthening our souls. Blessing to you my friend eve
Bear Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 10:07 AM
Lovely. Hope all she thinks about is you also. Hugs Edith
Anderson Avatar
November 28, 2014 at 4:56 PM
Just beautiful.
Onclaud Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 2:46 PM
ohh,this is moving... affectionately expressed with mellow lines, tim.. huggs
Smith Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 3:35 PM
Thanks nette ...huggs Tim
Sathasivam Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 2:58 AM
Excellent. Beautiful and romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs
Smith Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 3:34 PM
Thanks Ravi my friend
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 7:21 PM
Tim my dear friend, very romantic love sweet poem. Very beautiful! so much yearning and longing. A 7 for me! Enjoyed it! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
Smith Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 3:27 PM
Thank you Dorian my sweet friend.. Hugs Tim
Yvonne Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 6:17 PM
Beautiful, sad! I want her to be with you. Touching write.
Smith Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 3:27 PM
Thank Maurice... Hopefully one day.
Nance Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 5:42 PM
That is beautiful, every words filled with want. Very well said.
Smith Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 3:26 PM
Thanks Cas...hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 5:12 PM
I am so touched, until reading this I had no idea how much I meant to you! All kiding aside, this is an excellent declaration, I hope she excepts the invitation my friend.
Smith Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 3:22 PM
Lol...thank you my friend
Anish Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 4:12 PM
Good tale of infatuation. Keep 'em coming! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Smith Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 3:17 PM
Thank you Matthew
Allison Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 4:06 PM
Wow - gosh Tim I wish I could write romantic poems half as good as this - would be very very happy - 7 faves and WOW again! Hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 3:16 PM
Give it a try Jan....I'm sure it will be romantic.... Hugs Tim
Biles Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 3:30 PM
Very beautiful my dear. Good structure and just romantic, and again, beautiful. -TJ
Smith Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 3:15 PM
Thank you TJ ...hugs Tim
Chircop Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 2:48 PM
Oh my my my..how irressistibly Beautiful,Romantic and heart captivating this is Coach.I love it,The verses so alive,a vivid imagery which takes me on a journey between your verses. Favo(u)ring this enchanting poem ,Sweeter than a peach! To my fvs!Charma. : )
Smith Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 2:54 PM
Thank you Charma..Irresistible? ...Let's hope so : ) ....hugs Tim
Meade Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 2:12 PM
I saw the sunrise this morning and it was beautiful . . . you see the sun setting and love shimmers on the horizon and within your heart-words. Nicely done my friend.
Smith Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 2:21 PM
Thanks David...They both are beautiful and thought provoking...Tim
Manassian Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 2:11 PM
Oh, Tim.....it's a beautiful piece....Who wouldn't fall for that? Lovely...
Smith Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 2:19 PM
Thanks Eileen...Who wouldn't :) .....hugs Tim
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