All I Seem To Doubt

One thing I couldn’t take, disappointment in your eyes.
It all became so clear just like the bluest skies.
If I could do it over so much I would change.
It feels as if it all is now quite out of range.

I pick up the pieces of what’s left of my heart.
You still live within me although we are apart.
You could change my world with only a smile.
Opening my eyes, so that I could see for miles.

I try to just move on but you are still there.
I just can’t turn it off, pretend I didn’t care.
I also realize that I never meant you harm.
It concerns me deeply I caused so much alarm.

The pieces of my heart lie scattered on the floor.
What the future holds, you never can be sure.
I know it won’t be the same what I say or do.
Remembering a love that really was so true.

I don’t know of the future the bridges still burn.
Somehow I just hope today that the tables turn.
I learn to live with and then without.
My biggest problem is all I seem to doubt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 2/19/2012 7:09:00 PM
Well written poem, I really enjoyed reading it.
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Mark Russell
Date: 2/19/2012 9:17:00 PM
Thamks doubts always seem to get the best of me. The thing is they come with quite a high price tag don't put things off they don't fix themselves. Have a great night and thanks for reading.....Mark
Date: 2/19/2012 12:07:00 PM
very interesting thoughts you have written down here makes me think of my own doubts ~always p.d.
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Date: 2/19/2012 3:51:00 PM
Thanks again:) Doubts always seem to get the best of me and then I wind up disappointed with some of the decisions I've made.You can turn back time but you can learn, Have a great night and take care......Mark
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