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All Her Fantasies -- Retitled

She warned me that I'd best obey
   My daughter always has her way

When I say 'No,' she stomps and pouts
   Then calls her friends to cuss me out

I don't know why she acts so mean
   'Cos I fulfill her every dream

With the latest in tech and stylish clothes
   She's a 'fashionista' head-to-toe...

She's realized all her fantasies ~
   Except for getting rid of me




   Originally posted 12/06/2020
   under the title, 'Where Did I
   Go Wrong?

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 9/12/2021 9:34:00 PM

Sounds slightly like my 16-year-old used to. I feel your pain. Te He. I want to try writing a couplet, it looks like fun. This one sure is!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/13/2021 11:29:00 AM

Consider: Every sentence you write is a potential partner for a couplet! ~ Rhyme-Guy

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/12/2021 12:32:00 PM

Such a fine set of couplets, Gershon. I must have missed it on the first go-round, so thanks for bringing it back. I sometimes think that some of our best work gets buried by time.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/12/2021 4:57:00 PM

Thanks, Milt. :) gw