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All For You

You just don’t appreciate me And all the things I do When I don’t come home until late I do it all for you I treat you like a movie star After two days I call you on the phone Actually I treat you like Greta Garbo She wanted to be alone You don’t understand the sacrifices That I make each day of the year Instead of wonderful quality time at home I spend lousy time drinking beer Sometimes I stay up all night with a friend Because she’s, I mean he’s feeling down You want me to be a more caring person So it’s for you I’m on that side of town I hope this will help you understand Why I do all the things I do So you know when I’m not home for a week That I’m doing it all for you. Just fun and fiction!!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/25/2009 1:51:00 PM
Vince, thanks for your comment on my poem. You are such a good writer. I enjoyed reading your many works.
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Date: 6/9/2009 11:32:00 AM
There is nothing more lovely than a sense of humor..... Carrie is right, you Rascal....always, Christy
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Date: 6/8/2009 11:10:00 PM
There you go again, Vince Suzadail, Jr !!! I wonder why the wife has not kicked your sorry arse until now! Fred (PS I have to say though that, he he he, I am learning some little tricks from you which I might find helpful when dealing with my wife! Wish me luck)
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Date: 6/8/2009 4:26:00 PM
Nice try! ~lol~ Very cute Vince. Love, Shar
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Date: 6/8/2009 2:49:00 PM
Made me chuckle Vince, i am found out after all, he he - nicely written>James
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Date: 6/8/2009 10:55:00 AM
lol lol lol Thanks for the laugh Vince
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Date: 6/8/2009 6:43:00 AM
Sounds like a man(a bad one that is)lol
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Date: 6/8/2009 6:15:00 AM
Hope she has her rolling pin handy....for her rascal of a hubby!! :)
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Date: 6/8/2009 5:55:00 AM
Love the justification in the poem of why the voice is not coming home....this piece made me chuckle because I have heard these lines used before and seen the women who have fallen for them...
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