Vijay Pandit Poet Free verse

All Beautiful Inside

Ubiquitous like a shining star, I felt her presence near and far
A smile she advanced, echoing in my pause, how lucky I was
Touching my heart with cadence of music in melodic visage 
Engraving forever, with romantic lyrics, our eternal message
Composed by her eyes, in a soothing voice, like playing a Sitar

I imagined her to be all beautiful inside, before she parked
In front of my eyes, with a loving heart, exactly as I thought

June 22, 2018
Second place in Seven lines of romantic heaven contest by Silent One

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Valsa George March 21, 2022 at 7:31 AM In seven lines you have created a romantic heaven ! You are so good in romance, Vijay, each having a unique touch!

Vladislav Raven October 28, 2018 at 5:18 PM Hi Vijay, This wonderful piece deserved to be a winner in a contest. This one has your usual beautiful lines. Your write with such creativity and beauty my friend, each piece is a wonderful poetic song. Love sings gentle in your hands. A Fave. Have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.

Pandita Sietesantos July 15, 2018 at 10:34 AM It's no surprise that this sweet piece is such a big winner! While it is wonderful to be attracted to what we see on the outside, it is more important that the person is beautiful on the inside! Congratulations on another well-deserved big win! Hugs and love. Pandita

Eve Roper June 27, 2018 at 8:10 PM Vijay, congratulations on your win. Nicely done and very beautiful . Hugs Eve ~`* Vijay Pandit June 28, 2018 at 3:54 PM Thank you Eve.

Susan Gentry June 25, 2018 at 11:41 PM Congratulations on your top win with this beautiful romantic poem in only seven lines. Well done! :) Vijay Pandit June 26, 2018 at 7:08 AM Thank you Susan.

Edward Ibeh June 25, 2018 at 3:45 PM Enjoyed this! Congratulations on your fine win, Vijay! Vijay Pandit June 25, 2018 at 4:44 PM Thank you Edward.

Pandita Sietesantos June 25, 2018 at 9:20 AM Oh yes! Just swinging back with BIG congratulations to you, my friend, on your sweet win! Well- deserved! Hugs. Pandita Vijay Pandit June 25, 2018 at 4:43 PM Thank you Pandita.

Roy Pett June 25, 2018 at 8:43 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Vijay, your poem is absolutely beautiful as is the music, a joy to read and to listen to. :)) Vijay Pandit June 25, 2018 at 4:43 PM Thank you Roy.

Heidi Sands June 25, 2018 at 7:20 AM Back to say congratulations for your win Vijay :) Well done! Vijay Pandit June 25, 2018 at 4:43 PM Thank you Heidi.

Silent One June 25, 2018 at 6:38 AM You do romance so well, even in just seven lines.. Nice music also Vijay... Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Vijay Pandit June 25, 2018 at 4:42 PM Thank you Silent One.

James Swartz June 24, 2018 at 8:37 AM Very beautiful words on love Vijay. Your skill is on full display in this poem. Vijay Pandit June 24, 2018 at 3:39 PM Thank you James.

Harry Horsman June 24, 2018 at 5:49 AM Beautiful poetry, such a joy to read. Vijay Pandit June 24, 2018 at 7:12 AM Enjoyed reading your feedback..many thanks Harry.

Pandita Sietesantos June 23, 2018 at 9:10 AM You are indeed a true poet of romance! This beauty is another reflection of your awesome talent! I am sure that Silent One will love this piece! Best wishes for a top win, Vijay! Love and hugs. Pandita Vijay Pandit June 23, 2018 at 6:32 PM That is so kind of you, my talented friend..always appreciate you visit and feedback. I know you wrote a fantastic entry for the contest.

Mystic Rose Rose June 23, 2018 at 4:35 AM you can romance me anytime, you got the magic touch. I hope you win big. Vijay Pandit June 23, 2018 at 5:51 AM That is very kind of you Pixie..appreciate the sentiments..many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2018 at 5:48 PM very romantic indeed, Vijay. WELL done! Vijay Pandit June 23, 2018 at 5:50 AM Thank you Andrea.

Nette Onclaud June 22, 2018 at 5:17 PM ohh, the bewitching spell of love's first delight... wonderfully expressed, vijay... huggs Vijay Pandit June 22, 2018 at 5:28 PM Many thanks, nette..always happy to read your kind feedback.

Demetrios Trifiatis June 22, 2018 at 2:25 PM No greater reward for the heart to see the inner beauty of the beloved my friend, Vijay! Excellently written! Good luck! Vijay Pandit June 22, 2018 at 5:27 PM Appreciate your kind feedback, my friend, Demetrios.

Besma Riabi Dziri June 22, 2018 at 10:58 AM Beautiful romantic lines creeping into the heart and filling it with loveable heavenly admiration.. A pleasure to read your write dear Vijay.. The best of luck in the contest. Stay safe and blessed. Vijay Pandit June 22, 2018 at 5:26 PM Delighted by your visit and kind words, Besma. Many thanks friend.

Mike Gentile June 22, 2018 at 8:46 AM So well expressed in your romantic flair, Vijay. I really love "composed in her eyes" Best for a win !!! Vijay Pandit June 22, 2018 at 9:43 AM Thank you Mike--appreciate the kind words.

Lyric Man June 22, 2018 at 8:00 AM Vijay.. Wow, this is breathtaking. A truly romantic feast in just a few lines. You have a gift and I bow to your pen. Wishing you well in this contest.. confident you'll score high! Vijay Pandit June 22, 2018 at 9:43 AM Coming from an expert like you, I really appreciate the glowing feedback..many thanks Lyric Man.

Heidi Sands June 22, 2018 at 7:46 AM Very well written Vijay! Expressed so well in the seven lines. Good luck in the contest :) Vijay Pandit June 22, 2018 at 9:41 AM Thank you Heidi..always happy to read your comments.