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All At Sea

all at sea, my restive heart waters are calm, but in calmness moored the bounty of a lover's soliloquy raging torrents bequeath a joy you ask of beauty's tapestry, guided yet do I seek yet do I fold in conjecture nature's bliss, consuming waves please... I ask in limerence and we, ships sail away

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Bill Baker

Date: 12/2/2023 4:56:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today, I'll be back for more. Your imagery in this one was exquisite, but I enjoyed the last two lines the best ... your use of limerence was a brilliant introduction to "and we, ships sail away". Well done! A FAV for my list. Bill

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 12/3/2023 1:30:00 AM

Thanks Bill, jolly decent of you

Ink Empress

Date: 11/29/2023 11:14:00 AM

Ah i always find the word soliloquy so poetic and goes well with a sea themed poem. Beautiful word weaving here.the ending is brilliant and profound too. Deeply intriguing and well delivered. Pleasure reading this.

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/29/2023 11:29:00 AM

It is a great word, thanks for giving your time and thoughts to my poem IE, I truly appreciate it, thank you