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All Around : the Journey of a River

From the dark hole I rose Off the rocks I was bound Falling along with the edges To find hills all around I got up to the slope Rising and falling to the ground Splashing along with the edges To find trees all around I was soon on a smooth fall Down the high mount Cutting its strong edges To find the valley huts all around I finally took for the ocean My ears of a whooshing sound Trampling over the stone edges To find my mother all around.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/27/2015 2:09:00 PM
Soumya Mukhija, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 9/21/2012 11:08:00 PM
Really beautiful poem.
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Date: 9/14/2012 2:14:00 AM
Lovely poem Soumya! Nicely done!
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Date: 9/10/2012 6:17:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you Sopumya. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2012 10:14:00 AM
nice write
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