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...inspired by 'The Railway Children' by Seamus Heaney Memories as sharp as diamonds, keen as knives, the smell of train smoke burns my nostrils still. Chilly mornings, misty, magic, gleaming rails so full of promise, lumbering Leviathans, wheezing, roaring, bound for Scotland or the local seaside towns, holiday makers reveling. Dewdrops glisten, hush and listen for the storied 8:09, ready with our pens and journals. Now steam and smoke are long forgotten, flashing wheels and majesty, except for old men who once were young with memories as sharp as diamonds.

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Date: 12/22/2015 12:01:00 AM
I love this, Keith- it has a wonderful sense of place, reminded me of the poem 'Adlestrop' by Edward Thomas. And a nice poignant finish to it, too. Great stuff. regards, Viv
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/23/2015 6:56:00 AM
Thanks Viv... much appreciated. Keith
Date: 12/21/2015 8:12:00 PM
keith - your poems elevate this site and i am a most appreciative reader. this one really got to me...
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/21/2015 10:21:00 PM
Thanks for the compliment... you are such a dear! Best Wishes, Keith

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