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I am stuck in a prison
	of inept indecision
		without a specific vision
			lacking exact precision.

I suffer from the stigma
	of this puzzling enigma
		in a world with no charisma
			void of pi but full of sigma.

My mouth espouses words
	but their meaning is absurd
		no integrity inferred
			as my vision becomes blurred.
			
As day turns into night
	with insomnia I fight
		my sanity has taken flight
			all sensibility is impolite.

To you I say farewell
	my ship is set to sail
		I hear the boarding bell
			on the cruise I take to hell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/6/2012 2:06:00 PM
Very interesting form...I've learned something. I agree the last verse packs a punch. Nice Job !! Enjoyed the read !
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Date: 1/5/2012 4:42:00 PM
I wish the last stanza was written by me,pure stuff...thanks for reading my last thing...Dino.
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Date: 1/5/2012 1:01:00 PM
These are not easy to write, thank you for such a delight! ;) Well written!
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Date: 1/5/2012 11:53:00 AM
Really like the words and form.....George
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Date: 1/5/2012 11:21:00 AM
Wow! X-celent write!
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